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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JJDudeman
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Review By [spring] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
You did good. Thanks for making me cry. And smile.

That was sooo satisfying... I'm glad Sirius isn't dead, but it feels right that Cordy couldn't be "Goddess of Everything" and stop every bad thing... I always thought that Harry losing Sirius, Lupin _and_ Dumbledore as well as being an orphan and an abused child was too much. Keeping Sirius in his life, is something that could make the other losses bearable and help him grow into a strong man, without shutting down emotionally.

I'm going to amend my memories of the HP/Ats canon to include this alternate version... [tearful smile]
Comments from author:
Aww... that's so nice. Thanks
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrincessTai
Oh sweet Lord I just love this.
First of all it's Cordy-centered :-D
I liked the first person a whole lot. Not many people can do it but it came out well.
It came out so much Cordy but Delia. The person with the memories of both. Cordy-lite but I don't mean that as an insult at all. It was fitting. And I am sure with the encouraging of the twins pranks and the dating of the Fred there is plenty of room for the bite we know and love.
But I enjoyed the displaying of that softness people forget she has. I liked the mutual hugging between her and Fred. If anyone could take new life in stride would be one of the twins, Fred especially I like to think, and if anyone could understand war and secrets and how it affects those one cares about it would be her.

I was so happy that you mentioned other characters too.
George being a bachelor. Ron and Herms spectacular, but loving, arguments.
Very fitting and it tied everything up properly.

Kudos to you and the person who requested this :-D
Comments from author:
Aw! thanks so much. I worried a lot that I had left out too much of the kick ass quality of Cordy, but I wanted her to be a new person so I didn't want to over do it either. Thanks for the nice review.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Effrem

Nicely shows how one person can change a whole world in a simple way.

But one of her Daughters should have been Buffy/Willow etc , just a small link to BtVS.


Comments from author:
I thought of that, but there wasn't a female character she actually ended up liking except Fred, and that just seemed wrong to me.
Review By [(Past Donor)Effrem] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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