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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
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after reviewing i was thinking... remember the demon eggs the scoobies get from class... it would be cool if after a short time Xander's egg hatches into a yoshie type dragon/animal/lizard
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
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wow, that is fun to read
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ColdFuzzions
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It was funny.

Does this mean he hangs out in the sewers a lot and explores to find hidden treasures and warp zones? What is the Hellmouth concidered?

If he sacrificed himself to close the portal, would that only take away one life? Would it perhaps send him to a Game Zone instead? >8P

Would he be the one to use the Troll God's Hammer instead of Buffy?

If they fought ADAM, would he find and use a Star?

Can he stomp on Demons and do Damage to them? If he found a Demonic Turtle Shell, could he do the '1Up' trick?

Will he still be a Carpenter as well as a Plumber?

Does he have the urge to grow a mustache?

Will he be taken away to go on the other adventures or guest shots that Mario does show up in or is he 'basic', what I mean is, if Mario keeps being added to Games like Dr Mario, Mario Karts and Smash Bros, does Xander automatically upgrade to match?

Will other Game Chars possibly show up if pulled through a portal, meet Xander and call him Mario instead?

Just thoughts when I think of Mario.
Comments from author:
Heh, nothing in the sewers besides Demons and vamps, generally. Not sure where the portal would send him. Interesting concept, though. MarioXander would probably be able to use the troll god hammer, very very easily. Heh, he would probably have a large supply of invulnerability stars, but they only last a short while. He could definitely stomp demons, but probably not do the 1up trick. Not sure about the carpentry, but yeah, Xander would want to grow a mustache. Unfortunately, unless another chaos spell was cast, Xander would only have the abilities from the games up to Halloween. And Xander would deny being Mario and would want to be called Xander. Feel free if you want to do a continuation or your own version. Those are always fun to read. Thanks.
Review By [ColdFuzzions] • Date [7 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RockyWilliams
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I don't know how well this would work as a continuing story, but as a one shot it was very entertaining. If you did try and continue it, I'd definitely give it a read though :)
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ReflectionsOfReality
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What I would be curious about is whether breaking bricks would eventually allow Xander to find hidden items(or even just giant gold coins). An invincible Star would work wonders on the Judge and do you even wonder what would happen with a Feather or Raccoon Tail? And can he crush demons by just hopping on them? What would happen if he found a yoshi egg? Or even what he would do with a flute (do you even want to wonder what would happen if Xander played through a few hell dimensions?) And what could happen if Xander interacts with large drainage pipes?

You can't beat some of the classics though I don't even want to imagine if what would happen if Xander discovered the equivalent of a Game Genie and started to be able to break all of the rules that he is already barely holding onto.

Please just one more?
~Reflections
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [19 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
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LOL! Well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sinner
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cape and yoshi?
Review By [sinner] • Date [11 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KingHenrytheV
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Original and entertaining. I'd rather see more innovation like this story than to see this story continued. Keep up the good writing.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from musiclover
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i suggest going though other characters good work
Review By [musiclover] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from feynstrom
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What, no Xander doing the most classing of all Mario maneuvres? No jumping on their heads to stun them?
Comments from author:
Well, he could have, but fireball is so much better - and he did prove his jumping abilities in the library.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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LOL! Loved the special effects setup.
Comments from author:
Heh, Glad you like the story
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkmagician
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Frickin' Sweet! Please continue! Pretty please with magic mushrooms, fireflowers, and starmen on top! I'd like to see him get a hold of other power ups like racoon leaves, tanooki suits, cape feathers, and the like. Xan would probably love the flying. Plus, plumber knowledge? At least he can still get a job installing plumbing for new construction.
Comments from author:
If I could think of somewhere to go with this story, I will :D
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
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Your story made me laugh. Thanks for the funny mental images.
Comments from author:
No problem - glad you liked it
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rothos
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I would have thought the Zeppo would make a better Luigi. Well at least he didn't have a maple leaf. What you going to bring in Koopas?
Comments from author:
Huh, I suppose he would make a better Luigi, what with his height and all...

Yeah, raccoon Xander with the leaf... or cape Xander with a feather...
Not sure about Koopas, but wouldn't be surprised if at least one demon species resembled Bowser...
Review By [rothos] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Graycalls
Review:
*Snicker*
Comments from author:
^_^
Review By [Graycalls] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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