Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Awesome! Very well-written, too. :) I also like the line “Back off, they’re yours?” too. I wonder what Buffy would have to say in reply to that... ;)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt
] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Luna
“Back off, they’re yours?”
--- Awesome Line! hahaha ;)
Review By [Luna
] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from amusewithaview
"Back off, they're yours?"
Ok, loved this. Very Dawn, very brattish, very sincere, very funny.
Review By [amusewithaview
] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Not happy cuz why? Its cute.
You are feeding plot bunnies chocolate and marshmallows? No wonder they're hyper bordering on rabid.
You're supposed to feed plot bunnies healthy foods like cheese cake. And before you start thinking that cheese cake isn't healthy just remember its got all kinds of good things in it like cheese and eggs and stuff. And if you absolutely have to give them chocolate, try the hot cocoa kind cuz sometimes that can put them to sleep.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated