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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Glumski
Review:
Wow, these really were two excellent stories. At first I didn't even want to read it because that back-to-childhood-theme isn't my thing but you managed to work it very well. Especially that scene with Nirrti in C5 of Going Home is one of my absolute favourites. The characterizations were also spot-on, though I have to say that the Scoobies felt a little... ahh... bland in comparison, I guess. That might be because we see them for "only" 60k words while we already know the others for almost four times as long and it isn't really an issue anyway. There were also a few missing words or spacing errors here or there but nothing that'd disrupt the flow of reading or impede comprehension of the content.
I really hope you'll come back to the series and write a third part; I'm quite curious what you'll do with the loose ends (or rather pointers). Good luck with your other work till then and have fun while watching SG-1 again. :D
Comments from author:
Thank you a lot. I am having fun watching SG-1 again.
Review By [Glumski] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Zeviz
Review:
Thank you for writing this enjoyable series. I hope that you'll continue it at some point.
Comments from author:
I have a chapter done for a continuation, but my "heart" is not in continuing this series right now so it will linger on my PC until I want to. I am planning to rewatch Stargate SG-1 at some point, that triggered me writing the original so it might do so again. But I am busy with a really big writing project (non-crossover Harry Potter Alternate Universe-ish where part 1 of 7 is about done but un-betaed).
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from raxadian
Review:
Shorter than the other story, but quite good.
Comments from author:
Thank you for all your reviews, some comments were cryptic, but all were welcome.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from raxadian
Review:
Yeah, she is happy here.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from raxadian
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ReplyBuffy would be quite dangerous.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from raxadian
Review:
I wonder why the replicator took the old man?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from raxadian
Review:
So RepliCarter is an evil mommy?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from raxadian
Review:
Didn't you said the in the previous story the DNA change would end making Buffy taller? I guess Dawn did not notice that Buffy is taller than before cause Dawn is still taller than her.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Funny how the spell got the former Scoobies to another planet.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Spica
Review:
This and the prequel, truly superb stories and i really hope you get around to the third story in this series as well some day.
Review By [Spica] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Katt
Review:
I just re-read this...again... and still love it. I'll join in with the crowd and say "I hope you get bit by the bug again soon and that your Muse gifts you with a plot line you like," cause seriously I want to read more in this verse, sooner rather than later =)

Katt
Comments from author:
Read and understood ;)

I can't promise anything, but I will take it under advisement.
Review By [Katt] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Zorgdub
Review:
Without hesitation one of the best series I've read on this site, the writing is very good and the story is excellent. Congratulations, and thanks.


There is one thing that bothers me about this story, though. Any time Satsu's identity is mentioned, she's just another random Slayer ; but she's not! She was Buffy's *lover*. I kept waiting for that to be ackowledged, but it got pretty much ignored as if it had never happened.
Comments from author:
Well as most of this was written before Satsu became that, I haven't ever felt the need to go back and change it. The comics were in its first few issues when this came out and to be honest I didn't and don't follow them, because I just think the story is too weird and messy in its story telling for my taste. So this story is not comic-verse compatible even if it is related. As for Buffy's lesbian tryst I thought it was sad they wrote it and then threw it away much like the later abortion story. It feels a bit like headline baiting to be honest.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from mscecilyunderwood
Review:
Thank you for writing this series! It was an immensely entertaining, complex layered story, highly lausible and well-thought out. I've been hard-pressed to interrut my reaading once % started. I do hope you continiue to write again. There are so many possibilities you can think of about the Ori, Atlantis, the group of the rebel female Jaffa, the Jaffa that's always been free and was hidden for centuries even amongst the Jaffa thenmselves. And of course Buffy has yet to find the man who'll love her as she loves him (one of the downside she thought of in her current universe). Will it be Mitchell, Sheppard, Lorne, Ronon an Atosian perhaps? Or if you reaally want a supremely complex issue, why not let Michael of the hybrid wraith turned human love her? Or maybe Buffy Carter would need not look far away at all for the romantic love of her life bec a certain friend has been there all along? A certain 40-year old teenager (wink, wink). Oh do write again pleeease!
Comments from author:
Hi there.

I am writing :) but my muse is diverted to other stories unrelated to this series at the moment which was also why I never continued. I'd rather be sure I can finish what I start rather than starting something and not being able to finish it or being satisfied with the results. So I am sorry I can't promise anything new here even though I have 2-3 (some 30k words) written of the final part of the trilogy, but I have already decided to redo them because I felt like the story sucked so...
Review By [mscecilyunderwood] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Berserkerzeroone
Review:
Great story and series. I hope the writing bug bites again because you left some things unexplained at the end there.

I have high hopes that you can continue to write this series and it would be fun to see the interactions between Buffy and Vala, two cheeky, smart-mouthed women that love to cause chaos for those around them, as well as Buffy and Ronon, two warriors that enjoy the thrill of the fight, and her reintroduction to McKay after so long since the Alarm Impression Incident, if she goes with Sam to Atlantis.

Edit: 10 Dec 2012
If you're having some problems with a plot, maybe you should just put Buffy on Atlantis during the Ori Saga at the behest of the IOA or is kidnapped by her new ship and have the big thing come after that and Continuum and then coincide with the end of Atlantis for Buffy's big destiny.

Hopefully that will help you with the writing bug, but sometimes the best way to get back into things is to revisit them from the beginning cause you might notice something you didn't before.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I hope it bites me too.
Review By [Berserkerzeroone] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ebony
Review:
Still waiting on the third story inthe series Bring on the Fire.
Review By [ebony] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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