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Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from BrownFinderth
Very good story!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [13 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Aww, was sad to read that they are both basically parent-less now :( Great chapter :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from WhenNightFalls
A friend of mine recommended reading this and even though it took me two days (with sleeping/eating/socializing breaks) I've read the complete series and am currently tracking the 'Lost Scenes'.
I must say, though I'm normally a Buffy/Faith lover, the way you wrote Buffy and Veronica is making me doubt my OTP.

Amazing writing.
Comments from author:
Wow, thanks. :-) I'm a fan of Buffy/Faith too, but, Buffy/Veronica is just fun in a way few other pairings are. Glad I made a believer outta you.
Review By [WhenNightFalls] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Great Story, Great Series. Thanks for writing and posting it all.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from JediLaSombra
Sad to see this series end but "All good things..." and all that. I'm glad I followed you from the other site to here where you continued the story. The way you blended VM and BTVS is amazing. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.
Comments from author:
Thanks. :-)

And the other site meaning Yeah, I've given up on it. Posting stories there is tedious; it's not very author friendly. I'm glad you found the story here, too.
Review By [JediLaSombra] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from BrowncoatRebel
I'm really sad to see this story end. I love this series and I'm going to miss it but it really was an awesome ending. Lots of pieces of the ends of both shows fit together in your epilogue. The absence of The First makes sense because Buffy never died, but even though The First never showed up it makes sense that Sunny Dale collapsed because there was still an army of Turok-Han underneath the Hell Mouth. Where the world in your fics would end up is also a lot different from canon because all season 8 canon is driven entirely by there suddenly being a slayer army. Tieing in Angel and W&H was another nice addition. Logan becoming some kind of vigilante Van Helsing makes sense surprisingly enough. It's sad that you still killed off Anya, but in Xander's plus column, he still has both eyes. In my thoughts on where the story might go if it were being continued I like to think that maybe Xander and Mac get together eventually, despite my initial impulse to pair her up with any remaining single females (although that would mean Mac/Faith and I'm not really seeing that happening, maybe Mac/Dawn if I had to come up with a femslash pairing for her).

Now some comments on the series as a whole. First and foremost, as with all of your fics, I can hear the characters saying these things as I read them, you are amazingly good at capturing character voices. The crossover is very smooth and it's believeable, especially Buffy and Veronica's interactions. Over all the fics read like the shows, lots of humor but serious when they have to be, and the transition from one to the other is never really noticeable. I hate that this series is the only VBuffy story availble but at the same time that makes it unique.

You're an amazing author and I can't wait for whatever you might write next, even if it doesn't have Veronica. Maybe you could try doing something with your old Buffy/Gwen fic, or wait a few issues into Angel: After the Fall and write something Nina/Gwen (hopefully someone will, because Nina was licking a girls face in the first issue and she needs to be slashed with someone), there's also the third 'or' of Buffy/Satsu (they've already kissed, it makes sense. Ok, so it was really just Satsu that did any kissing and Buffy was asleep but that's not really the point)

(Ok, so most of that last bit stopped being a review so I guess I should stop now before I get even more off topic)
Comments from author:
I'll just say thanks, because I never know what else to. :-) I don't see Mac/Faith, either, but Mac/Xander is interesting. It would never be a focus if I ever did start a new series, but it is interesting. I welcome anyone to play in the little crossverse I created if they want to, by the way. Starting all the way with "Summer in Neptune," I've wanted someone else to be inspired and pick up the slack. ;-)

But to address that last bit...yeah, I'm waiting to see if the comics inspire my fic muse.
Review By [BrowncoatRebel] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from zigpal
Excellent topper to this series. Verffy vs. the World, the way it should be.
Comments from author:
My feeling too. Thanks, zig. :-)
Review By [zigpal] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from castofftheday
Definitely sad to see the series come to an end, but at least it was a great ending. You've done such an awesome job on the whole series, blending the two shows together so seemlessly and keeping everyone in character. Excellent job. Kudos.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kindness. :-)
Review By [castofftheday] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from gleeky
Loved it, great ending to a great series, sad to see it end, but loved it the way it did. Great job. Continues my thought that i haven't found a story of yours that i didn't like.
Comments from author:

Thanks a lot. :-)
Review By [gleeky] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Un-Lucky Charms" from DigiEmissary
Poor Keith.

I'm glad to see Veronica and Buffy moving on, though. The "marshmallow" analogy makes an interesting comparison to the "cookie dough" of non-Neptunian S7. Buffy and Veronica together make very yummy marshmallow cookies. Maybe even Rice Krispie Treats - they have the snap, crackle, and pop.

Also, Dawn discovering her Keyness is good. It certainly happened in a better way than her sleep-deprived tale of Amy cutting her open in one of my own fics.
Comments from author:
"Marshmallow" was also my call back to the VM pilot. And I totally meant to make the comparison. Yes. *cough*. (Score one for my subconscious)

Thanks again. :-)
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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