Just thought I'd point out that you called that poor baby a boy. Spanish is a very gender-differentiated language. With a few exceptions, if it ends in 'o', it's a boy, and if it ends in 'a', it's a girl. Therefore, Speed would have called her 'la pequena', not 'el pequeno'.
Sorry, I'm a nitpicker, but god is in the details and all that.
Comments from author:
Nitpicking's cool when done gently, that's how you learn. In this case someone needs to yell at Google Translator which is what I was using at the time. I simply put in the sentence I wanted translated and let it do the rest thinking it knew what it was doing. *shrug* Oops. That's what I get for thinking. *grin* I've also been told that it didn't translate the right dialect of Spanish for me. It was doing Spain Spanish instead of Cuban Spanish. Thanks for catching that, you're the first one to do so I think.
I am so glad that you have updated this. I love how you've written Speed and I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next. Please post more as soon as you can.
Review By [QueenSereya] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I was just wondering if you'd abandoned this story, or if you were going to be coming back to it eventually? S.
Comments from author:
I do intend to come back to this one eventually it's just with my being in college.......... *helpless shrug* Sometimes the school work terrifies the muses into hiding. I am poking at it though, promise.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Not Rated
I realize that you've put 'The End' on this last chapter, however you added that 'for now' on there. . .I would love to see some more. . .the relationship between Speed/H/Eric develop, how everyone reacts to seeing Speed again. . .those things.
You've done a great job with the story thus far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [VaLady] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I absolutely love this story and I hope it will be continued for a long time.. or at least long enough to get those three clueless types together. Yummy. MD.
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [8 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Humor and Death... not a combination that should work well together, but Lost Son Returned works splendidly. I loved the bit in chapter 4 about the Knight in Shining Hummer" :o) . I had to laugh out loud at that. I hated it when they killed the Speed character off of CSI Miami. This fic brings him back with flair. Eric Draven of the Crow series got to make a life for himself back in the real world.. I look forward to the Crow Timothy Speedle doing the same. And who is the snake anyway? Is it Stetler? Can't wait to find out. Oh, and I definitely want to see Speed/Delko/Caine get together.
Review By [kayron] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Finally read this. Great work!!!! Glad they've accepted what he is before they've even seen him. Like how you have Tara as his birdy companion. Hope there's more soon!!!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
And, it's so nice to see a Crow thing where they don't come back to avenge their wife/girlfriend. Honestly, they have so many opportunities for walking-dead-ness and each movie they comeback to avenge their girl?
I always thought killing off Speed was a shitty thing to do.
Ooh, are Xander and the others going to show up later? Or is it just Tara? Is this even set in the same universe as Buffy? If it isn't, does that mean that the spirit realm is connected to each possible universe?
Review By [escagirluk] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
I LOVE THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN SPEED AND TARA. THEY ARE PERFECT FOILS FOR EACH OTHER. TARA HAS BLOSSOMED IN THIS STORY AND DISCOVERED HER INNER STRENGTH. XANDER AND SPEED HAVE DEFINITELY BEEN A BAD INFLUENCE. SPEED HAS KEPT ALL HIS BEST ATTRIBUTES WHILE PICKING UP SOME OF THE CROW QUIRKS WITHOUT BEING QUITE SO DARK. YOU'VE REALLY MADE HORATIO SEEM HUMAN WITH BOTH HIS STRENGTHS AND FRAILTIES. THE SUPERHERO POSE IS ALSO FUNNY HE REALLY DOES IT A LOT. I REALLY CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW THIS STORY GROWS.
Review By [MOONWOLF] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]