Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JanessaRavenwood
This, of course, assumes you weren't rooting for Light...
Hail Kira! Kira is Justice! :-)
Review By [JanessaRavenwood
] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TouchoftheWind
Review By [TouchoftheWind
] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from narukyu
Haha, nice. Light is the kind of guy you either love or love to hate. I love your Spike voice, by the way, and the last line was just perfect.
Review By [narukyu
] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Darksoul
A really interesting outlook to Spike's mentality and sense of balance and fair play. Disturbing yes but still
I didn't truly expect such an insightful and philosophical take on William the bloody(Awful Poet).
Poetic justice in a macabre way
One *Supposedly* evil monster taking out another.
Review By [Darksoul
] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nikolas
Oh my gods thats hilarious I loved it I could just see Lights reaction. An Spike's Spike you should do L's reaction to the bit
Review By [Nikolas
] • Date [5 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TranslucentDarkness
That was hilarious! Gotta love Spike!
Review By [TranslucentDarkness
] • Date [12 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheHeartist
That was cool, Light against the one (or one of I suppose) person that he'd be powerless against.
Review By [TheHeartist
] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TombCranktheCrafty
Love the last line, "what's *your* excuse?". I like the use of Death Note, and the fact that dear old Spike's immune to the power of the notebook, but I've got a teensy bone to pick: Light specifically stated he'd never shorten his life-span in exchange for the eyes; he wanted as long a reign as possible once he created his utopia. Besides that, well done!
Review By [TombCranktheCrafty
] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from supernaturalfanatic
Love it. That was awesome. I do love Death Note, but I love Spike more.
Review By [supernaturalfanatic
] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated