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Review of chapter "On The Ship" from Tripper
Oh, I love the last one. It feels very much like a scene in the story and not just a movie poster, if that makes any sense.
Comments from author:
Thank you, and that was exactly what I was going for, I'm glad it works :)
Review By [Tripper] • Date [7 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)Sulien
I really love picture 2.1. It says so much about the story and the back story, especially with Jack looking toward the Elder Jack standing in the 'Gate in the back ground. These are all wonderful, but I particularly like that one.
Comments from author:
Really? And I just got around to redoing that one (since it was a bit too crowded) and well, the efect as you can see is completely different. I forgot how well that placing of mini Jack towards Old Jack worked. I might try something based on that again but generally I'm trying to change the pictures I'v been using here and reduce the number of blended pictures.
Thank you for taking the time to review :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [2 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven - Attack on the Jedi Temple" from mithrilandtj
I like this one the best with the evil Ani at the bottom.
Comments from author:
Me too :)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven - Attack on the Jedi Temple" from Tegasus
Really good pictures. They all look fantastic, but I would also like to see some variation in the pictures used. They look like really good variations of the same picture. ^_^
Comments from author:
I plan on making some more with different set of base pictures. But the first ones had mainly pictures related to the story: Vader going off to kill the younglings, the planet- Yavin IV, more younglings (- they feature prominently in the stories), ObiWan and Anakin fighting - which kind of takes place in the same time as the first story, etc.
But I definitely should have used different Buffy pictures :)
Thank you for your review :)
Review By [Tegasus] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven - Attack on the Jedi Temple" from purrfus
I love the stories, and was delighted to see the artwork.

Buffy's picture / pose is a good one, unfortunately mini-Jack's suffers in comparison - in some cases due to placement and in others due to the quality of the original you are working from.

Example - picture 2: Back to back works better in this because of the eye-level and face angel.

DV clutching Buffy works, but the mini-Jack in that one seems totally out of place.

Overall good poses and excellent color blending
Comments from author:
thank you :)
I've redone the second picture, using a different photo of the actor that played mini-Jack - he looks a bit different now but works better with the whole picture.
I've also added another version of the picture with DV without Jack. I kind of wanted to have something of SG-1, something of Star Wars and something of BTVS (obviously: Buffy) on every picture. But this one wasn't working very well.

Thanks again for taking your time to give me some pointers :)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tripper
Very nice, I like chapter four, version one and chapter seven the best.
Comments from author:
Thank you. So far I like chapter seven the best too :)
Review By [Tripper] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven - Attack on the Jedi Temple" from (Past Donor)hellmouthprincess
Nice, they all look like they could be actual movie posters
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
I sort of based it on how Star Wars movie posters look. But it was a bit hard to find a good picture of mini-Jack.
Review By [(Past Donor)hellmouthprincess] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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