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Review of chapter "Torture's Sad Exchange" from inarae
Review:
nice work. You tied the universes together very well, and kept the tension (UST and otherwise) high. I'd love to read more. thanks for writing and sharing
Comments from author:
Thanks so much, I do plan on writing more to this series and hopefully I can continue to keep the tension *cough* UST *cough* high.

Thanks for reading and for leaving feedback!
Review By [inarae] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torture's Sad Exchange" from FiveOfFive
Review:
*Sqeeeeeeeeee* I can't believe it's taken me so long to start on this! After finishing the first part of this tale I was all gung-ho to get started on the next installment, but those pink elephants that had popped up after I finished Burning Memories didn't leave after a good nights sleep; so I had to try and talk them into going elsewhere, but to no avail. It seams they were on a mission from God and believed I could take them to the Coo-Coo-Ca-Choo factory on planet Nargoz-7; and, well to make a long story short, I only just finished steam cleaning the slime out of the carpets....

I have GOT to stop writing reviews in the wee hours of the morning! What all of... that, was leading up to is basically me saying that you're a god. You know exactly when to banter, and when to have someone give a rare vulnerable smile; when to crank up the tension, sexual or other, and when to put in a needed laugh. The most amazing example of your brilliance was at the end of story, when Buffy's hurt and Dean finally drops the Winchester facade and acts like the good man we all believe is lurking inside him just waiting to bust out. But you never take it too far, he's still Dean, so you add the line that had me cracking-up when I felt like crying: "You're not going to be a girl about this are you?"

Long review, but I had a lot of praise to give... and after all that you had better keep writing missy *stern finger waggle*
Comments from author:
I can't believe it's taken me this long to reply. I was floored by your review and tried to respond a few times but couldn't ge the words to express how wonderfully happy, giddy, ecstatic, over the moon, overjoyed, humbled, shocked, floored, blown over... etc I was.

I still don't know how to put the words together. Thank you. I'm so honored that you feel this way about this piece/series. Means so much, especially since my muse was stubborn as a mule in finishing this piece.

That scene is what caused the delay. Trying to get Dean's reactions to still be Dean while showing a small snippet of that amazing guy he can be. At the same time I didn't want the scene to play out cheesy or for readers to wonder WTH happened for Dean to go from teasing and cutting down Buffy to being Mr. Prince in 3.5 seconds. *grins*

Thank you so much for reading and then for leaving this *squee* inducing review. You've truly made my month!
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torture's Sad Exchange" from Javian
Review:
Great writing & characterizations. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I strive to get those characters down and it thrills me to know that I've done that. I appreciate you taking the time to not only read but to also take that extra step/time by leaving feedback! Much appreciated!
Review By [Javian] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torture's Sad Exchange" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
Great story, I really like both of them in this series. I hope you continue the story soon, it is really descriptive and captivating. I really like the interaction between Buffy and Dean. Keep up the great work and write a new series soon. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm having a lot of fun writing this series. Have worked really hard on getting my description polished and uber glad to hear that you enjoyed it! There is definitely more to this series and hopefully my muse will be kind and allow me to get the next story written and posted!

Appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave feedback. It means a lot to me, so thank you!
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torture's Sad Exchange" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
It's all good! Great mix of snark and angst. Hope to see another installment soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! Glad I didn't over angst or snark the piece up but managed to get a nice balance. Appreciate your review!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torture's Sad Exchange" from chajalive
Review:
Great! Dean and Buffy would have a lot of tension between them.
Thanks for this story.
Chaja
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading! Yes, lots of tension and butting of heads!

Appreciate the feedback!
Review By [chajalive] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torture's Sad Exchange" from KnightOwl
Review:
I liked this installment. I have to say that I feel really bad for Buffy. She is so alone and Dean being mean to her all the time can't help. I could see her taking the knife for Dean and hiding it from him to take care of it herself. She can be pretty independent, especially when someone isn't as nice to her as they could be. I can also see Dean not trusting her, but I hope he quits being such an ass to her soon.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed and I wanted you to feel empathy for our Buffy. Sorta need to set the stage for what is to come. Don't worry, Dean won't be an ass for the whole series. Things will be arising that will cause his attitude to change direction and her taking the hit for him will earn her a few points in his book. *grins*

Thanks so much for reading and leaving me feedback! Means a great deal!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torture's Sad Exchange" from exqurere
Review:
Awww so cute and perfectly in character
Comments from author:
Woot! I love when I master the characters! Wonderful to hear that I have achieved that!

Glad you enjoyed this piece and thanks so much for taking that extra bit of time and leaving feedback. In fact, thanks for reading the piece!
Review By [exqurere] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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