Disturbing and intriguing. I'm looking forward to finding out more about what brought this version of the world into being; meanwhile, I hope that they're right in their mutual belief.
Very nice, and you have captured the dark days well, along with what might be a ray of light with these two meeting up, just hope it stays good for them both.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from PhantomGuyver
Review:
great setup so far, can't wait to read the rest
Review By [PhantomGuyver] • Date [17 May 13] • Not Rated
Well, quite a pleasant surprise here, and enjoyed the second part, as it meshed quite well with part one as far as the darkness went, and will hope to see more in the coming days, so we can see how Hermione and Xander would grow closer, as well as what all the scoobies might be doing to throw the dark off its game, and if the Powers have decided to give it up to the dark sliders also? Looking forward to more please?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review- I'm glad you gave the second chapter a chance after such a long break. I put a new chapter up just now, so I am trying to update this one as an active story again!
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
To be honest, I was quite shocked to see this come along with a new chapter. I'd read the first chapter quite a few times and the premise had always intrigued me. A complicated and completely different world from anything I'd come across before, and with my two favorite characters taking the lead.
I guess I should chuck an apology in here too for not reviewing that first chapter.
It's extremely well written, and as I said a unique and interesting premise, that I can't wait to hear more about.
Keep it up.
As a small aside, I think it's the second last paragraph of the new chapter, I think you meant hopelessness as apposed to hopefulness.
rei_ite
Comments from author:
Thank you for giving the update a chance after so long away (I have plans to finish up another long-standing story of two, after I get the three currently active ones finished). I just posted a new update, so hopefully it lives up to any expectations. Thank you for the grammar catch- I'll try to remember to go back and edit soon.
~Kei
Review By [reiite] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Hmm.. good start. Shame you haven't updated it in a ''while''. A patch is a striking detail.. why wouldn't he use a glass-eye to hide his identity better ?
Review By [warfolomei] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
While a great start to a very good story, for some unknown reason, the author had to leave it unfinished. Just one chapter and I was hooked on this tale!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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