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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
This was a good story, loved reading it. but you killed Meridith waaahhhh.You had me thinking of so many possibilities as to who the unsub might be. I thought first sloan and then maybe thought for sure it was Burke because of the stress of wed plans then I thought of the chief because of the sep from his wife. this was great and as I said loved reading this.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
I'm not a huge Meredith fan but but but...pout I dunno I like her and McDreamy together.

But you story is great..I'm off to read the next piece...You have a knack for the tech stuff huh? (Well I think you do because it all sounded very professional)


cheers
MJ
Comments from author:
Thanks. Yeah, some of the tech stuff I do in real life, some I just did a lot of research for. I'm starting to feel like I'm collecting Spencer Reid's library. I just finished reading something about geographic profiling so I could make the body dump location for my next serial killer accurate.
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [5 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
Hmm... Well, I thought about Mark Sloane because there were so many mentions of "charming" when they discussed the profile.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
Nice. Glad the killer was some out of left field dude. Well done. Now get back to Recognition.
Comments from author:
I am, promise. The file got lost when my laptop died so I'm having to go back a rewrite it. Argh!!
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
This killer is just creepy. It's a good thing that I'm not overly attached to Meredith.

I really want to know who the bad guy is. I've kind of got an idea.... but I'm not sure.
Comments from author:
Now that you've read the whole thing, who did you think it was going to be? I'm dying to know.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BillieBog
Review:
Really enjoyed this story and hope to see the next chapter soon.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from schulyr
Review:
very interesting start i look forward to reading more hopefully with more slash?
Comments from author:
The slash in this one is sort of minor, but there will be more in the future!
Review By [schulyr] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cflat
Review:
It's nice to read this without any correction marks in the way. And the title really fits the story.
Comments from author:
Thanks! You did a great job :)
Review By [cflat] • Date [15 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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