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Review of chapter "Prophesy Girl" from starwolf
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i've enjoyed this, although I think you get Grace's power balance better at the end. the other needs to come as she grows. one thing most people slip up on, when Buffy fought the Master, she got handed her ass, like Grace did. after Xander brought her back, they fought on an even level. no other slayer had been through that, and any later fight with Kendra or Faith should have only lasted minutes. I'm looking forward to your next season. thanks for sharing this
Review By [starwolf] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prophesy Girl" from bradsan
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Good story. I never get why everybody can have secrets but when Buffy has they all act she did something wrong. I don't understand Giles his first priorty is Buffy and not anybody else. To me he had to tell her or demanded that she would know no matter what.

But hey that's me. Again a good story.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophesy Girl" from Obsidian
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Very interesting story. I like it. THanks
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clarityfades
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Mary Sue fic. Sorry, I won't be finishing this or reading the sequel. Hopefully you'll write a non-Mary Sue fic in the future, that I would be happy to read.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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HMMM... Interesting way to insert her into the story; by having her be Jesse's sister.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Kill a Boy on the First Date" from TheatricalBarrister
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In chapter 10, after Greg's awards dinner, Grace and Greg had sex. Diane knew that Grace was staying in Greg's room. The morning after, Greg's dad talks to Greg about it, and Greg admits they didn't use protection.

By chapter 12, they apparently *haven't* had sex yet, and are telling everyone that they haven't, and telling everyone that it's their own business when and if they do, and saying that Dan and Diane are okay with whatever their physical relationship might be.

This is a bit distracting to the reader, mainly because after an event as momentous as a couple's first time together, you spend so much time talking about how they *haven't* done that. At the first mention of them *not* having sex, when the couple had dinner with Mike and Kelly, I thought Greg was lying just because it was Grace's dad. But as they continually mention that they *haven't* done anything, I'm starting to get the feeling that you, the author, have contracted a case of amnesia about what you had written.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Settling in Part 3" from TheatricalBarrister
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Somehow I missed this story before now. Quite well written so far. OCs are tricky for most fanfic writers, but so far Grace seems to be pretty believable. My only complaint is that you didn't make Leah enough of a bitch, but I guess if she doesn't know Grace is a wolf, she wouldn't see her as potential competition and start any crap over her.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophesy Girl" from Wolflady
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It's done? Okay, that caught me by surprise.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Out of Mind, Out of Sight" from purrfus
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I really wanted to smash Mrs. Miller.

Could you maybe have Marci try again and succeed? Or maybe she could be eaten by zombies?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nightmare Aftermath" from purrfus
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Found this today and rushed through.

I've read Briggs, and you've done a good job of bringing the realities together.

Greg: I really liked him. I wanted to cry and throw things at you, and then I wanted Grace to eat you. At that point it really sunk in. You made Grace and Greg real people which is not easy to do with original or barely there characters, and done a great job with the supporting cast of characters. The demon history and characters added so much, and I'm enjoying the Kyle and Willow bits alot.

The outsider view of the Scoobies is also well done and provides an excellent counter to the main story.

As soon as I catch my breath I'm going to read it again - maybe even review as I go instead of being pulled along in a rush.

More soon please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nightmares" from dracoluvr
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u suck. i cant believe u killed Greg. meanie.
Review By [dracoluvr] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightmares" from jenni
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I'm sad. I liked Greg. I wonder what's going to happen next, especially with her and Greg's parents. Hopefully they don't blame her, and everything is eventually okay. Is there another love interest in the future? Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
I know, I liked Greg too. And no, the next part has both Greg's parents reactions to what happened and everyone finally gets a whole lot more explanation about what Greg was part.
Review By [jenni] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Me Robot You Jane" from LMiC
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I like it.
Review By [LMiC] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Pack" from jormunguard
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First off I'ld like to say that for the most part I like the story and the characters. However, my one complaint about the story so far is that you need to introduce some form of either conflict or another character that Grace cant just beat the crud out of. You've pretty much introduced a character that is perfect at everything and threatened by nothing. In other words you have Superman with no Kryptonite. This type of story is interesting for only so long before people stop reading it because they already no the result of any conflict.
I hope you do intruduce some form of conflict that Grace has to work at winning soon, because like I said I do like the characters and story for the most part.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Kill a Boy on the First Date" from DavidFraser
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I'm up to ch 12, and have to congratulate you so far for the extreme joy engendered by what I've read. Exceptionally well written.

Well done !!
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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