Review of chapter "What's to Come" from hanahanachan
Review:
very entertaining, I hope you write a sequel. I'd love to read how you develop their pack and the Willow/Sev pairing. That and seeing the golden trio all confused. lol.
Review By [hanahanachan] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Not Rated
I've got all these ideas, but I'm trying to keep them under wraps until after I've finished one of my other fics.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [hekatenovember] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What's to Come" from MissingAuthor
Review:
No not the end!!! Is there going to be a sequel maybe? Anyhow... you did a fantastic job with this story. The characters were written very well and believable in there reactions and interaction. ;)
Can't wait to see what other stories you come up with next!!
Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for your reviews! I may do a sequel at some later time, but it would most likely be about the three boys and - and now you have me thinking up story lines. Damn it. No. I'm going to keep writing She Walked and get working on my Dexter fic. A girl can only do so many things at once.
Thanks again! 'lucidity
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Ohh... Willow's going back to Hogwarts, can't wait to see what kind of trouble her and Snape can get into there! Good chapter and really enjoying the story.
Wispr
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
"Dear Albus," it read, "I'm glad you're not dead. It seems we have this alike. For, while I write this, an axe has just now missed My head and has almost killed Spike."
"The werewolf, he's quiet, Not on a flesh diet, So him I don't mind in the least. But the tall boy beside him Talks nonsense on a whim And, to my mind, is worse than the beast.
I hope you are well, I'll be returning to hell-- I mean, HOGWARTS to teach again soon With the witch, the dead man, the wolf with the nice van, and, most unfortunately, the buffoon."
Comments from author:
tee hee - lovely:)
Thanks for your rhyme! I know it took time. The support is adored. I'm really quite floored!
'lucidity
Review By [halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two Weeks Later" from MissingAuthor
Review:
Severus's letter, couldn't have been better, his doing of wandless magic, makes him feel less tragic, my reading of your story, makes me sing of your glory, can't wait to see, what you may write for me, about this review, that I wrote for you!
Wispr
Comments from author:
I'm desperately touched, in fact - overjoyed! I'm so glad you liked the format I employed to relay what had past in the previous days.
Your reviews are always a treat to read! I admit I await them with absolute greed. Thank you again and again, and always!
'lucidity:)
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [14 Mar 08] • Not Rated
That was a good chapter... your plot line is staying nice and solid and how you had everyone acting was very in character. Also good work on Hugh, for a new character he really came across very real!
Wispr
Comments from author:
Thanks! That really means alot!
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Lovely Home" from MissingAuthor
Review:
Really did a good job with this chapter... can't wait to see what the plot is going to turn out to be!
Wispr
Comments from author:
Thanks! It's all coming together soon-
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [9 Mar 08] • Not Rated
I like how you write how Snape sees the muggle world and his perception of Willow and Spike. Plus his curiosity about Willow and Spike's pass.
Just one thing strikes me as odd and that is Spike and Xander. They just seem to chummy. Other than that your story really is flowing along good and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Wispr
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I guess I'm having trouble deciding on what all their previous relationship (Xan and Spike's) involved. I'll make a decision and clarify.
Thanks a ton for your comments! 'lucidity
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated