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Review of chapter "Interlude" from KingDarius
Review:
i am not familiar with the punisher comic you mentioned, though chances are i have it laying around somewhere. at first i assumed that gadriel was a typo, for gabriel, but since you crossed this with supernatural, i KNOW thats not the case, which means i have no clue who the hell gadriel is supposed to be. its been years since saw robocop, but ill take your word for it on the auto 9, and i know that the lawgiver is from Judge Dredd. i like that movie, lol.
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Morgomir
Review:
Great start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Greywizard
Review:
Glad to see more of this show up. Hope we see more soon.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [6 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loose Ends 2" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
thanks for the new chapter and I must say I'm not sorry about Stein *g*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [24 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loose Ends 2" from Loatroll
Review:
Interesting stuff! Looking forward to more. Thanks for the read.
I especially liked that video and how Stein reacted to Castle.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loose Ends 2" from Bobboky
Review:
very nice
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loose Ends 2" from Frardowin
Review:
please add a crow reference in the disclaimer of this chapter for the detectives freak out.
Comments from author:
D'oh, missed that. I'll put one in.
Review By [Frardowin] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loose Ends 2" from Fregith
Review:
You really need to work on your tenses. The random switching back and forth from past to present tense is confusing and poor writing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for pointing that out. Will correct it ASAP.
Review By [Fregith] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loose Ends 2" from eriktheviking
Review:
Cracking good story, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I appreciate the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loose Ends 2" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loose Ends 2" from djhardim
Review:
It sounds as if Xander was killed and buried.
Comments from author:
It does, doesn't it.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loose Ends pt. 1" from TheDon
Review:
where does xander come in, was he completely taken over by castle or what?
Comments from author:
A very good question. It does seem like Castle is completely in charge doesn't it?
Review By [TheDon] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loose Ends pt. 1" from Wolflady
Review:
I have never understood how anyone could consider balance a good thing. The only ones who like balance in a war are arms dealers. There is no such thing as balance in nature. There is a reason they call it 'eat or be eaten'. A DEMON as a messager from the good guys? I don't think so!
Comments from author:
Eat or be eaten only works up to a point. You can't eat too much or you'll run out of food. you don't eat enough and you run the risk of your food supply overwhelming you. So a balance does exist in nature. It's just not obvious.

I figure Whistler is like Clem, he wants to enjoy the finer things in life but his bretheren keep threatening his lifestyle. He just does it on a more global level while Clem works locally.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loose Ends pt. 1" from missinglink
Review:
Really like the tone of the story and the way it is shaping up.

One thing, you named one of the two oversights for this as Gadriel. Is this correct or did you mean Gabriel. Not a big point, but have seen Gabriel the Archangel used before, but never seen a character named Gadriel to my knowledge. Just was curious.

Also I hope and imagine you will be doing some form of a flashback to either explain the appearance of the punisher or how he went unnoticed on the hellmouth until the summer. If not would ask why as this seems a plot hole that needs filling with satisfying explanation.

Keep it coming and appreciate the story so far. Later.
Comments from author:
Gadriel seems to be a unique character to the Purgatory mini-series of the Punisher's Marvel Knights line. As far as I know, he only appeared in this series.

I'm working on either making the Punisher's origin on the hellmouth a part of Giles and Gadriel's conversation or part of the reveal to the gang as a whole. Not sure yet but it will be explained.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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