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Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Ansku
Review:
Nice :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Thanks for closing loose ends - fun tale!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapters.

I am looking forward to start reading the next story in the series.

::Feeds the plot bunny::


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Shadow is the diminution alike of light and of
darkness, and stands between darkness and light.
-- Leonardo da Vinci
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What an entrance for the new little guy!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Bunney
Review:
You are still awesome.... :)
Comments from author:
Wow, thanks. See, THAT is a total ego boost lol.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [30 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Just don't let it end, yet! Too much fun.

Besides, until Maria decided to put all their cards on the table, Kyle's part in the story was practically non-existent. Surely, there must be some interesting stories to tell on his end of things?

(I started to really like Kyle as soon as he and Max got drunk together, and in some ways I think Tess' betrayal and the death of Alex hit him harder than anyone else -- she was his de facto sister, and Alex was the other 'normal' guy in the group, the one he could kvetch with when they were trapped underground and learning how to kill glowing blue alien crystal thingies. Plus, he was so cool as Isobel's best platonic buddy, putting her needs ahead of his own.)
Comments from author:
Good news. I have decided that the next part of the story will be the Buffy/Xander romance part, so Kyle will be a big part of that. Oh and I have an arc planned where he is one of the central players as well.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, a new chapter.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

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"The theories which I have expressed there, and which appear
to you to be so chimerical, are really extremely practical — so
practical that I depend upon them for my bread and cheese."
-- Sherlock Holmes: A Study in Scarlet
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I just love the accidental meeting in the diner, and all the little touches about Faith's wonderful auntie instincts and the Roswell residents' silent agreement to pretend NOT to notice Jason's family resemblance, etc..

Looking forward to more, whenever you're able to get to it.
Comments from author:
Thanks very much. I'm working on it. Got a few betas to work on so it will be a bit. Kind of ironic really that i can't get a beta, but I do them all the time. Thanks for the love
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Poor Riley!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
That Vala line was beyond brilliant...ROFLOL brilliant!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked that. I hate that this chapter is so short and abrupt, but my muse did a runner on me.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Lots of fun. Looking foreward to more!

You really need to check the spelling, and not just with a spellchecker. You're using a lot of homonyms ("to" instead of "too", "their" instead of "they're", etc.)
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Poor Riley! (And I almost meant that, sincerely!) He's always being misled by his higher-ups, it seems. Tsk-tsk.

But Buffy's right, of course, that even ATTEMPTING to confront her with only 20 guys (even if he didn't know going in that she was involved and that he'd obviously need "a bigger boat") wasn't very smart.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from kayron
Review:
COOL! Love the different series combination (Roswell, BtVS, Angel, and Stargate). GOOD HUMOR :o) ! Now... let's see some bad guy butt kicking!
Review By [kayron] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love the fact that Andrew has actually earned (and receives) respect in this story.

Angel's freaking out over Spike's name-change (and other assorted details no one had mentioned to him previously) in the previous chapter was much shorter than expected. Good work on not going overboard with the whole irrational-Angel thing.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I loved Andrew on the show and I hate that in every single fic I have ever read where he's mentioned, he is always a loser or just an annoyance to everyone.

I didn't overdo the Angel thing because he's not really central to the story in general, and I feel he would have been to shocked to freak out too much at that moment.

Maybe later, but not right then.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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