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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VenusdeMolly
Review:
Extra Cute.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, I hope you will read my other stories and enjoy them as well.

Aerialla
Review By [VenusdeMolly] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)kaela
Review:
That was really shiny. Drunk Kaylee is cute and I love your Jayne at the end. Also this is a pretty good justification as to why Kaylee is so patient in waiting for Simon. Really good job.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review. As soon as I saw the pairing I started writing. I am glad that you enjoyed the story.

Aerialla
Review By [(Recent Donor)kaela] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orion
Review:
Very nice.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review and I am glad that you enjoyed it.

Aerialla
Review By [Orion] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
I really enjoyed this story, its feel good factor was very high.

Lorne was very in character.

Kaylee, I thought would be more cautious about getting drunk in a bar full of monsters.

I would also think she could handle her drink better.

A logic flaw I saw was she gets intoxicated - ie alcohol poisoned (because that's what being drunk is - poisoned) to the point of hiccuping and swaying.

What good would drinking a cup of black coffee do for Kaylee immediately after she finished her song to hear Lorne's reading?

It would not make her consciousness clearer, as by this stage the three drinks she consumed would be truly kicking in working their effect on her metabolism and she would be at her most mentally impaired.

And she's still intoxicated when she gets back to the ship, so again what was the point of the coffee?

Only time makes a person sober up once they have alcohol in their blood stream, not black coffee, not cold showers.

But apart from that bit not ringing true for me, I loved your story like I said.
Comments from author:
I based Kaylee's drunken reaction more for something that would be funny instead of factual, but thanks for the heads up. For now I am going to blame it on Randall's vodka homebrew.

I am glad that you liked the story and reviewed. I hope that you will like my other writing as well.

Thank you very much

Aerialla
Review By [(Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Awww...! Wonderful!

Kaylee and karaoke with the Host? Perfect -- and you got the voices and attitudes and FEELING of the characters just right, to my way of thinking. Plus, of COURSE that would be the song Kaylee would choose to sing.

Just delightful! And touching, as well. Very much in keeping with the emotional palette of "Firefly" in its quieter and more inspiring moments.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I will admit that I wrote this story very quickly today after I saw the FFA pairing. It just kind of hit me as my fingers hit the keyboard.

I could really see Kaylee doing something like this and keeping it from the crew, seeing as how Jayne teases her.

I am so glad that you like it.

Aerialla
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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