Review of chapter "Chapter One: A Cry in the Dark" from organicmagic
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This is an interesting take on an alternate world. I'll be keeping an eye out for updates.
Review By [organicmagic] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Sowing Chaos" from romero
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I was just thinking about this story..What a nice surprise to see this update. I'm curious about what happened to both Hermiones. It was amazing that Ron's leg is better that ever due to Hermione. I enjoyed seeing Harold deal with Fudge of his world. I'm wondering what he has planned. The previous comments about Harold's opinion of magical portraits make me think that the portraits of his parents, James and Lilly, must have been disappointed in his upbringing and choices. I admit that I'm fascinated with the thought that Gellert and Albus raised him as their son. I would love to hear more about those years and their world. The tidbit about Churchill only getting the Star of Dumbledore makes me want to know evern more what was going on in that world. I do applaud the fact you made Luna as Harold's wife..I always thought that they would make a good couple. It sounds as though the "other world's troops" are on the battlefield already. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story.
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Preliminary Talks" from purrfus
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Thank you. Harold and Luna make a lovely couple.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Sowing Chaos" from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapter.
::Gives the plot bunny some Smörgåstårta (Sandwich cake)::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: The Calm Before a Storm" from romero
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I just found this story. Harold's character is intriguing and I would love to know more about his world. The idea of Gellert and Albus working together with Ariana's help was a pleasing thought. I hope you continue with the story.
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: The Calm Before a Storm" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny some carrot pancakes::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [22 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: The Calm Before a Storm" from Sabryna
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Great first chapters. It is really interesting and I'm looking forward the next. I am really curious about this Harold Potter's world.
Review By [Sabryna] • Date [21 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: The Calm Before a Storm" from ChiVayne
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Very nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: The Calm Before a Storm" from Ramenth
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Mm... Totalitarianism...
Comments from author:
Of a sort.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [19 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Preliminary Talks" from christytrekkie
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This was very interesting darker and I'm not sure what to think of the dobblegangerpotter and he married Luna wow. I cant wait to read more.
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Preliminary Talks" from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapter. :D
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Not Rated