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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from exess
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The foot notes were the best part because it made the story feel more like a terry pratchet book
Review By [exess] • Date [8 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Geyer
Review:
Very nice beginning, with so many possibilities. You've got the DW elements down perfectly. Good footnotes, intriguing glimpse of what promises to be a great backstory, and excellent cameo by the Death of Rats--I look forward[1] to him coming for Scabbers. I guess Harry and Ron [2] completely misunderstand the appropriate use of the Count's notes, and no doubt chaos levels will continue to rise. I don't think the Wizarding world is ready for this Harry [3].
(1) Despite the number of years since an update, there's always hope.
(2) Being only 11, they lack experience in post-Birds-and-Bees occasions.
(3) Not that they ever show signs of being ready for anything outside the normal.
Great fun!
Review By [Geyer] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eureka
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FOUR YEARS Catbert? Four years and not a single update....I think you need to PLEASE sit down with GoDogma and wrote some on your older fics.
I have been reading all your older work and I agree with what some are saying....UPDATE!!!
No really please see if you can do some work on the older fics and update them for folks. These are pretty good interesting works and they are just languishing here. I will continue to read ALL your work to see how many are good enough to admonish you to finish. LOL
Review By [Eureka] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from atticus
Review:
Dear god, this is the stuff! There should be more. The usual hilarity applied to Harry Potter? Fantastic.
Review By [atticus] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Prometeus
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Ron and Ginny?! ROTFL. You get a 10 just for that! 60 seconds later and I still can't stop laughing.

I hear you on endnotes. It's unfortunate that most websites don't support side-notes. They would if web programmers weren't idiots trying to replicate the functionality of paper.

Here's an example of a website that does support side-notes so you can marvel at the beautiful typography and the whole computer-orientation of it.

http://chinaperspectives.revues.org/document647.html
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from iamnuff
Review:
please stop with the numbers (1) your not as good as sir terry with them

most of the things you used them for dont even need them, just add the dicriptions in on the next line,
like you did, but without all the (#) buisiness to break the flow.


still, cool story, raised by granny weatherwax and nanny ogg, then trained by the guild? now thats a combination from hell. i almost pity draco and snape... almost.









(1) or at least, please put the notes at the bottom, thatway they dont break the flow of the chapter
Review By [iamnuff] • Date [15 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
strange but interesting, I wouldn't mind if you would come back to this story to add more to it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gonadius
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Moderately hilarious, with a smattering of odd. Only niggle would be the eggplant. EGGPLANT?! Fie sir, FIE! Its Aubergine!
Review By [Gonadius] • Date [23 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mokahi
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This story cracks me up every time I read it. You've captured the Discworld style so well. Such fun!
Review By [mokahi] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Richardthrnnsx
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Giving this a 10 for creativity. Hope you continue this plot as it has great promise and you always do good characterizations.

Thanks for sharing Richard3116
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
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Cracking good start with plenty of originality.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dave
Review:
You could do more with this.
And I hope you do
dave
Review By [Dave] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Yes, I like the footnotes under the paragraph better too. Love this and am muchly looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Amaya
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Was that Hermione gasping? Ooooh, wonder what kind of impact this version of Harry'll have on her. Wonderfully discworld-ish this is.

Actually it's not that much of a hassle to get to the end of the page and back, "ctrl + f" man, that's all there is to it.
Review By [Amaya] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sabellestarte
Review:
Wonderful! You really need to write more on this one.
Review By [sabellestarte] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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