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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well conceived and humorous almost.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Sounds to me like a great thing. Who would want to vist the caprica created by RM they were a bunch of morans and idiots who were to stupid to let live. I think it was the only time I ever routed for a cylon.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [28 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
They did not miss much. :)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)jedibuttercup
Review:
Sorry to be nitpicky, but...

...The opportunity was neither "overlooked" nor "missed" because both words imply that the SGC didn't *try*. They did. And there was nothing else they could have done about it, unless they happened to have extra spaceships just hanging around to go scout out every planet with a failed connection. Which they didn't.

Words like "denied" might work better in this context, and imply helplessness rather than incompetence, which would increase the sense of tragedy you said you were going for.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Well written and very tight...now the real challenge would be to write the story where the Stargate works....OK I"m hoping this make sense cause I haven't had enough coffee.
Comments from author:
I'm actually writing a story where it works. I'll be posting it to tthfanfic soon, but if you wanna check it out earlier, try www.fanfiction.net/~Aussie and try the story "Origins of Humanity". I decided to do this short ficlet because I hadn't seen any other story where it hadn't worked.

Cheers
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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