Review of chapter "Merry Christmas" from FiveOfFive
Review:
I agree, I think girl #2 works better as a Dean&Faith little one. She does look like she's planing some sort of mischief. But both girls are adorable, and either could work.
Although I think Dean would have something to say about that topless number his little girl is wearing. I'd also like to see what would happen to the first unfortunate boy who tried to date her... *giggle* sorry, I have four older brothers so I can imagine the hell he'd have to go through.
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Merry Christmas" from ChaosJunkie
Review:
Aww I love both of them! I think the second girl works better though. :)
Review By [ChaosJunkie] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review By [Leeef] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Merry Christmas" from CrushedRosez
Review:
girl #1 is better, i think.
Review By [CrushedRosez] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Merry Christmas" from Starbright
Review:
I think I'm going to jump on the bandwagon and vote for girlie #2. She just looks so mischievous, and her bone structure reminds me of Faith. Oddly enough, the first girl kind of reminds me of a very young Michelle Trachtenburg, from her 'Harriet the Spy' days.
Review By [Starbright] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Little Miss Haley Number Two looks more believable as the offspring of Dean and Faith. She's got some of each of their facial features, Faith's hair and the potential for her body proportions, and mischief in her eyes that matches both Mommy and Daddy's temperament. The first one would work better as Little Lilia Potter, from your other fic.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the input! Hum, I hadn't thought of having her as Lily- too old I think, unless I grow her up older. Thanks for the review and input!
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