Having read the 1st 7 Chapters of "Where am I " I must say I am enjoying this story & I look forward to more Chapters soon , And I also have read the 1st 14 Chapters of Slayer & 1st 15 Chapters of Her Fathers Daughter and hope you will soon return to them as well .( If your MUSE & the PLOT BUNNY'S get it together )
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice story, and I hope you update it soon, for the minor cliffy here has me wondering about what's coming next. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Something bad might happen? On the Moya? No wonder nobody believes her. What are the odds? Hm, if they're smart it'll be a while before the Peacekeepers figure out she's also a "Hu-man". Healing/planets was interesting. Willow would probably have the same problem with magic. So--want to take the chance to use a particular episode to end up with two Buffy's as well as two John C's? That could get very very weird.
Comments from author:
It's just Moya, it's her name, there's no definite article. Yeah, if they handle it right, they could easily make them think she's sebacean, at least until she meets Scorpius. Thanks :) glad you thought it was interesting. Wrong end of season 3 there mate - we've already got rid of that lunatic. I mention early on that it was the Crichton who stayed on Moya that ended up dead. Glad you liked it! love xx Shezzi
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from clarityfades
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Glad to see this updated...I was getting a little worried about its status (& the status of your other Buffy-centered stuff). I like that Buffy's picking up the languages quickly, it'll definitely come in handy. & I can't wait to see what the "Big Bad" is that she keeps sensing. Loved the protectiveness of Zhaan, & I liked that Buffy made the correlation between her healing & their time spent planet-side. Oh & I thought the "coulda been Clem's cousin" demon was a nice touch. :P Good chappie, more soon please!! :D
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Yay for update!! :D I liked that Buffy wasn't as fine as she made out to be...& that it was Aeryn who found her & talked to her. & I was wondering how active Sineya might get if Buffy didn't get some of her pent-up energy out...glad to see she did get a little sparring in. & yay for clothes! I also liked that Aeryn was worried that nothing went wrong...does that mean they'll come back to some crisis on Moya? Can't wait to find out.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated
might be neat if some of the races she encounters are 'demons' on earth and it turns out some of them come from this dimension... ie "Hey! That's an M'Fashnik! And he's molting!" or whatever. ---one thing that bugged John throughout the series: he'd enter a bar and everybody would assume he was a Sebacean PK & react accordingly. Should be fun for Buffy to experience that -
Comments from author:
Oh, I am so totally going to use that line...too good :) (Molting? bwahahahha) and yes, that is also an excellent suggestion. thanks for the suggestions, glad you liked it! love xx Shezzi
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Languages? Why does it have to be languages?" from Emeraldfire
Review:
Love it!!!!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]