you had a fine start to this very good tale. shame it has been adopted. thanks for the enjoyable read.

I would like to adopt this one!

Please feel free to do so! Sorry it took me so long to see this review! love xx Shezzi

I really wish you would continue this, as I like the story quite a bit. I can't adopt it myself, as I've only just started writing fanfic and have no idea where to take it, but I would love to keep reading it.

I'm sorry you aren't going to be finishing this. I ***really*** enjoyed it!

Nice update. I haven't seen Torchwood, and only know Jack from his appearance on Dr. Who, but I can totally see him acting and reacting how you've described him.

Love the Q&A. And you know, even if they weren't going to flip out trying to find her because they have to find out more about her, then you know that Jack would HAVE to find her just to find out what she may or may not know about his "condition".

Great chapter. Looking for more.

Cool. I just caught up on the last two chapters. Continuing to enjoy this for both the characterization and the plot elements. Thanks for sharing.

Just read this for the first time and wow... just blown away! Really like the detail you have in this story... like Warlock being "Oath-breaker", or the drug Willow took and why not aspirin. I've just started watching Torchwood and have to say you really got the characters of both shows done right.

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Lol! Loved the mutual Q&A session. But the big question remains: Will Tosh and Willow go out on another date? Lol!

I'm quite enjoying the misunderstandings about demons and aliens. Thanks for the update.

Heehee. Tosh and Xander ought to get along really well.

Oh my! There is just so many possibilities for humorous misunderstandings here. The Torchwood people are going to have a hard time with the magic and Willow is going to have problems believing the whole alien thing. Andrew will go crazy when he hears about Tourchwood. I just hope they have good locks to keep him out. I also can't wait for Faith to show up to save Willow and then everything will truly go to Hell. Lol! I just hope Tosh and Willow can make it to their second date.

That was interesting and fun, thanks for adding to the story.

Excellent work. Nice job with everyones' characters. But isn't Tosh getting to be as big a strangeness attractor as Xander? Lol! I look forward to more of your delightful story.

Nice. i just hope there isn't an overlyemotional tone when it comes to explanations :/

nope, got it all planned out, don't worry! thanks for the review! lovexx Shezzi