Okay, how did Glory get instantaneously from America to Scotland? Teleportation was never shown to be one of her powers. This is a major inconsistency.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
1. Why would Buffy go to Dawn's house for clothing when they're not going to be keeping her for very long? She can borrow clothes from the others or Buffy could have bought her something at a store. 2. Why did Buffy lay on the ground until Jack got to her instead of running the minute he left the window? She could have gotten away clean with her speed.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Just re-read the story and saw a comment from last spring promising updates sometime last summer. Any chance of those coming any time soon? I've been following the story since the beginning and would love to see more of it soon. :)
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
It has been over a year any chance you will update? This was an interesting xover idea and I like it a lot.
Comments from author:
Right now I have my A Level exams (13 days and counting) but I am going to do something with this story this summer. Not sure exactly what yet, it depends on if I can get back into the right mood to finish it or if I have to go back and rewrite the whole thing. Either way, I can promise that something WILL happen... this summer.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Any chance of an update. I really would like to see how Buffy reacts to Riley being married. Plus I would love to see if she gets a chance at being happy or if she dies again.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Sorry, just found all of the updates that I've missed. I LOVE that you've brought Riley in to explain the supernatural to SG-1. I hate to hear about your hiatus of this story; however, I understand how busy RL can become. Your readers will be anxiously awaiting any update that you are able to provide. Good luck with your classes. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [3 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I really enjoyed reading this, and I love the unique approach through which the two parties met. Kidnapping Dawn was brilliant! (Oh, must be Tuesday). Poor kid, she just gets snatched back and forth like a rag doll. I can't wait to see what you cook up next!
Review By [starletharlot] • Date [26 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
