Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from foxxyinu
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please write more!!!
Review By [foxxyinu] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from nerfherder
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Damn, another left fielder! Yet another of your works I drool at the prospect of reading more of... Got any more!?!
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Studyofchaos
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I just ran into this story again. Great story but finishing it would make it even better (begging and pleading inserted here...)!!!!
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from CrystalBlaze
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Lovely, but Cordy using the handle "K.Hunt"? Someone's gonna suffer for that.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from CageFire
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An interesting story, it looks like it's been quite some time since an update, over 4 months. I'm wondering what you were going to do next. I wonder if I'll ever find out. Hmm.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start. And this is a good story, so please stop being an Evil Author\Muse.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "My dad the..." from SledgeHammer
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Victor von Doom has had an on-and-off feud with Reed Richards going back to well before he donned the armor. Both are geniuses; however, both have a nasty tendency toward absent-mindedness. (Not exactly a good thing in Stark/Richards/Doom-class scientists.) In case you forgot, the *first* FF movie actually goes into detail as to why (and how) the feud went into high gear. Both Richards and von Doom bear responsibility for that (radiation shielding is a basic, yet *both* forgot it). Besides, when Doom and Richards met (at Empire State University), Doom was *already* heir to the Latverian throne (which he knew); Reed didn't know that (and Doom didn't tell him - not in either movie or any of the comics - Nick Fury blabbed to Reed about Victor's Latverian Connection). Feuds in the science community can be as vicious and brutal as any feud in sports (I'm talking real-world, not merely Marvel - read *any* of the various publications of the IEEE for proof). Also, other than that, since when has Doom *ever* decided to go after anyone (or any organization) that didn't go after him first? (It's why the relationship between Latveria and S.H.I.E.L.D. - and between Nick Fury and Doom himself - is not as *frosty* as you would think it would be.)
As far as this chapter goes - the screaming is Xander getting the BOHICA by Fate (again). Worse, he can't even blame the Hellmouth.
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [30 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Genuka
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Nice slip in with Cordy. More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Great take on the "real family" theme; it's a lot of fun. I haven't read the Princess Diary books, but I've read at least the first two of the Grand Fenwick books, so I love the geography you've come up with, putting the Duchy next to Latveria. Interesting back-story, too, with the multiple hellmouths and Xander's mother's Russian origin. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Elleria
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Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from ordieth
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She named herself K. Hunt? Really? LOL
Review By [ordieth] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from SamDragon
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Nice,poor Xander.Between mom the asassin and dad Doom,here come his first nervous breakdown.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Evilsandman
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I like it! Thank you for updating this one. And thanks to Sledgehammer as well.
Review By [Evilsandman] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How Doomed are we?" from Ghostrider
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*Giggles insanely*
Ahh, so much hilarity-in-waiting! Or is that hilarity-in-the-making?
And why is everybody just walking around town? No cars? Or are cars driven by Doom doomed to destruction? I can't rightfully remember. Now we have Cordelia joining up with His Royal Highness and Silver Sable.... as a BATF agent? I wonder where she got the ID (looking at you, Xander). Looks like Sable is Doom's Cordy, going on the way they banter. Faith may be like Doom's Jessica, hm?
As for Xander's mom, her suit is more revealing than Natasha's? What, it's a string bikini? Because, honestly, Miss Romanov's outfit makes catsuits jealous.
More when you can, please. The hilarity is contagious and you don't often see that with Doom.
BTW, I always hear Doom speaking with James Earl Jones' voice. I wonder why that is...
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]