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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Fitsofrage
Review:
It's been a while since i've reread your story. I'm glad i did ^_^ I still love the Faith/Oz/Xander interaction you have moving forward in this little tale of yours. It's unique in that most often you never really see them react to each other in fiction. I hope you plan to continue it.
Review By [Fitsofrage] • Date [30 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Damn, the second Faith and Xander in the Anita verse fic I've found and the second one that hasn't finished! This was interesting, too bad you didn't finish
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from chajalive
Review:
Hm, hope you are thinking of updating this sometime, it is a lovely beginning of a story, I especially like the Faith and Xander interaction.
Chaja
Review By [chajalive] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from viktoria
Review:
I greatly enjoy reading about Xander ending up in Anita's world. I absolutely love your story. You are a very good writer. I dearly hope you will update soon.
Review By [viktoria] • Date [13 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from kayron
Review:
It might seem to be an odd combination but maybe not. If Faith can't fight their way through a problem, then Xander can babble their way through. Just from the interaction between Xander and Nathanial, then Xander and Anita, it looks like Xander may have some kind of empathetic effect on people. Also, what's Oz doing there? Good read so far.
Review By [kayron] • Date [18 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MistieMossflower
Review:
This story is great so far and I can't wait to see who you pair Xander up with, I hope it's Asher. Keep up the good work and I hope that you update really soon. ^_^
Review By [MistieMossflower] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from darkmagician
Review:
Another excellent chapter. I like how easily Xander relates to the others. It's really in-character for him. I hope that they can overcome all the obstacles before them. I know how mad Faith is about being sent there, but someone needs to keep Xander from being Demon-Magnet again.
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Maeve
Review:
I can't wait for another chapter...I like the idea that Xander made Nate laugh. If you are still unsure about pairings...what about Xander/Asher/Nate? I think that Xander is good for the both of them because he is haunted by the loss of his eye like Asher is about his scars and he can relate to Nate cause throughout the series Xander was always trying to prove himself to the others so that he was not left out...plus the way that you wrote Xander's character (so far) seems like the type not to judge people to harshly, like he did in the series sometimes.
Comments from author:
I wasn't going to do a Xander/Nate pairing but for some reason, the muse keeps pushing me in that direction. So I'll have to figure out if I can make Xander/Asher/Nate work with the rest of the plot I'm developing!

Thanks for your thoughts and thanks for reading!
Review By [Maeve] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from HunterH
Review:
Can't wait to read more:)
Comments from author:
More next week! Glad you're enjoying!!
Review By [HunterH] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Jess
Review:
That was a great chapter. *hugs*
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Jess] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I like that Xander is trying to get Anita to open up
Comments from author:
You know Xander...he's always trying to be everyone's friend. And I mean that in a good way. I think he's pretty irresistable in the friend department. And Anita needs people like that around her. More soon!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mysnecret
Review:
This story is off to a great start. I look forward to reading more. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thank you! More soon!
Review By [mysnecret] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Sio
Review:
This is looking really great so far. I know better that to try to rush you, what with the whole creative process and all. I can't help but secretly hope that you can type in your sleep, so I am going to make my previous statement a lie and ask you to update soon.


A word on a page is worth more than a thousand in the mind.
~Sio
Comments from author:
LOL. I'll update soon, I promise. It's just funny cause the readers of my other stories are going to draw and quarter me cause I'm only updating this one. Hee! Not nice of me but I'm just really into this one right now!
Review By [Sio] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Great chapter. Good Xander moments, and good slow intro to AB characters.
Comments from author:
Thank you! My LJ readers aren't familiar with AB so I'm trying to weave them in carefully without boring you guys who know who is who.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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