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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Xeelia
Review:
I really like this story will it be updated?
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Kirallie
Review:
Good work! So how does Glory get explained since the key was ment to have been made from the SLayers blood for protection? Or is Dawn not the key in this? Glad they saved Dean from the Reaper without John dieing. Um, how did John not know about WIllow? Saurely he knows what his daughter's been involved with since she was a teen? Or was it simply shock of seeing her doing that to Dean?
Comments from author:
nope, Dawn is 100% human, and as for everything else, stay tuned, all will be explained! ;)
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
If you want, I can beta for you for this one. It's a good story, and an interesting take onf te BTVSSPN crossing.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from littleoldme
Review:
Quick formatting/grammatical thing- when two people are talking, you're supposed to start a new paragraph any time the speaker's identity changes. So in any given paragraph, only one person can speak. In some of yours, you have people going back and forth, and your dialogue tags aren't always written well enough to make it clear who's talking without conventional formatting. I was also a little confused about the timeline- It's set after season 4, but Dawn (who is three years younger than Buffy instead of five) is twenty? Or is it the case that it's several years after season 4, but seasons 5-7 just didn't happen? Buff was 18 in season 4, which means that it needs to be five years later than that for Dawn to be twenty, even if you do fudge their ages to make Dawn older. The math there is just fuzzy enough that I couldn't quite follow it- and I'd like a little more background on what's going on with the scoobies if this fic is set far enough into the 'future' for Dawn to be that old.

That said, I like the premise, and you have some real gems buried in the writing in terms of phrasing. I love your characterization of John, and the similarities between John and Dawn.
Comments from author:
thanks for the comments, as i'm unbeta'd (for now) i'll keep a closer eye on that and as for the rest of your (very valid) timeline questions, all will be explained.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2. Chapter One (edited and re-loaded!!)" from Winchestergrl
Review:
can't wait to read more. I definitely want to see where you go with this. It is very good.
Review By [Winchestergrl] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2. Chapter One (edited and re-loaded!!)" from BigG
Review:
Thats actualy pretty good Im intrested to see what happens next
Review By [BigG] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2. Chapter One (edited and re-loaded!!)" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
I love it! More soon, please?

~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2. Chapter One (edited and re-loaded!!)" from chaoskitty
Review:
This is really good!
i love the whole concept!
Cant wait to read more!
Your doing an amazing job!
Review By [chaoskitty] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from DirectorLady
Review:
I like it. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
Comments from author:
why thank you!! i hopefully should have the next part up soon. you know, god, weather and other family members permitting. lol
Review By [DirectorLady] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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