Like! Like! I always enjoy Edward/Buffy fics. Especially well written ones. And this one was definitely in that category. I adore the idea that Edward is manipulating Buffy, but in such a way that if she were to find out, she wouldn't even really be able to blame him, because really, it was her fault. Heh...
Review By [yoyoente] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Well done so far. The characters seem spot on, even if Buffy is heading toward the edges of herself. I enjoyed and would like to read more. Thank you for being one of the few to not have Edward trying to kill Buffy as their first meeting.
Review By [Dianasis] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Following Him" from burmafrdnow
Review:
I hate Weak Buffy stories and this is exactly that.
Comments from author:
Huh. Weak? I guess you could see it that way, but honestly it hadn't even occured to me. I have to disagree, she's not weak. She's making decisions that are taking her farther away from the Scoobies, but lots of other stories involve that...
Ah well, I wish you'd expanded upon your point but - *grins* - you can't win 'em all! Hope you find more stuff to your taste.
Danke
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Since I've been angry with Dawn and the Scoobies I like that Edward is keeping Buffy away from them. I also like that he considers Buffy his equal and the fire to his ice. I hope she keeps following him!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Following Him" from athenewolfe
Review:
lovely!
Review By [athenewolfe] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Not Rated
They were a bit ooc but the way you put them together made it work.... Is there going to be a sequel that shows the development of them from in character to ooc??? Anyway, I absolutely loved this, there isn't enough Edward/Buffy fics out there.
Review By [Ashmo] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I like the little detail about Slayers not being able to sleep on planes.
Cool perspective :)
Please have Andrew break out the Schrödinger's cat explanation. If the presents are allowed to sit under the tree until Christmas Day there's a higher chance that the collapsing waveforms of probability will result in the gift-giver having bought a better quality gift ;)
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]