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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from nomorebread
Review:
absolutely LOVE this story. you get awesome points.
Review By [nomorebread] • Date [17 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Marcel
Review:
"People are reading this, but for some reason they are being vewy, vewy, quiet...."

I don't know about others, but as for me - right now, I think what you're writing is great literature, but I am not so sure about it being entertaining. It is far too complex for that :) Granted, the only way that can be considered a problem is if I value entertainment more than character development... which, you know, fanfic site and all...

This is how I felt about the previous story, too. Great imagination, complex world, but it took *effort* to "grok" it.

Nothing of that should mean you should change anything, of course. I am just trying to figure out, even for myself, why I did not write more reviews. (Plus, I've only read four chapters of this story so far.)
Review By [Marcel] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from RandomSelection
Review:
Hey I just read the first two 'books' of you 'Super ... Bedtime-Story' and it's really great! I don't think I've seen this idea anywhere else before, and that says something in the realm of B/F-fics! Your drawing of the characters is really good, as is the explanation of Faith's motives and motivations (kind of the whole point of the story, right?).

The construction with a frame, and the actual story being Faith's fantasy (a little fact I had forgotten more than once while reading) adds a nice level of 'literary' complexion to the whole thing ... and offers a couple of interesting possibilities; I wonder, for example, why Faith couldn't hear B before ... Would be nice (yet not quite plausible) if she'd been listening all the time.

Well, I'll just go on reading now, just one more thing: For my taste, there are too long passages of thoughts/reflections of Buffy or Faith, and too little duologue, AL least in parts - but that's just a personal preference!

Great story!
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [22 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very nice...but why do I get the feeling Buffy is also listening somewhere off-stage!
Comments from author:
In a world where people have enhanced senses, few long, rambling conversations are going to be private.
^_^
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from DavidFraser
Review:
Well... Yes. Well done !

A real sense of enjoyment to read a story as well written as this.
Comments from author:
::Belatedly Responding::

Thanks!
This is probably my own favorite, of the series' I've written. I'm fairly proud of these.
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [14 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from SilverWave
Review:
Yeah!

Really getting into this :)

>Very cool.
>'Cause, um, there's a lot more of it.
>See you at book three.

Thank god for that - it would be very disappointing to just let it hang there.

Of course Faiths world view and her position of power, means that anyone sane would shoot her on sight ;)
... but that just puts her up there with Buffy's other love interests doesn't it?
Comments from author:
--Yeah!
Really getting into this :)--

Good to hear!

--Of course Faiths world view and her position of power, means that anyone sane would shoot her on sight ;)--

Well, the flip side of that is that only a fool would fail to kill Buffy and the others before they can interfere, especially when they're so much more vulnerable than the bad guys.
So it MUST have been love that held back a certain bad girl, huh?
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [2 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Jinxy
Review:
ooooh i loved this! the interaction between buffy and faith was very real and true to character and as good- better- than my imagination could account for. it was slightly slow, i'll admit, until it got to the point where they were together with buffy messing around with faith and being indecisive. from then on it was great. one of the better faith/buffy love stories i've read.
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)Lupo
Review:
I'm glad you decided to keep posting this story on TtH. Thank you very much. I really enjoyed it when I read it on your site and cannot wait for Book Three to be posted.
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Praetor
Review:
Great story!!! The insight that Faith (you) has is incredible to say the least. I also find it very creative that it is told as a bedtime story, enabling you to make changes without rewriting cannon.

BTW, I never leave a review every chapter, so you can consider this ten reviews in one package.
Review By [Praetor] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from yobbin
Review:
yay! realy enjoyed the story, love the take on how buffy/faith could of been.
Comments from author:
Very cool.
'Cause, um, there's a lot more of it.
See you at book three.
^_^
Review By [yobbin] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Idmonscat
Review:
I'm not normally fond of the Faith / Buffy shippage, but I'm definitely enjoying this story within a story you've got going on. Its an interesting take on the characters that doesn't ignore all the things that went wrong between them.
Comments from author:
Yay!
Thank you kindly!
::Bows::
Review By [Idmonscat] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
I liked how you ended this.
Very sweet.
I'll be keeping an eye out for Book Three.
Comments from author:
It only took me a couple hundred pages to get to the point where Buffy could maybe/possibly consider a relationship!
If you made it that far through the story, you deserve a bit of a sweet stopping point.
^_^

Tryin' to finish up Book Three, but things aren't cooperating at the moment.
I might go ahead and post what I have, which is about as much as Books One and Two combined....
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
"I've not been hearing much except for the crickets chirping (and Exiled being nice to me, as she always is)"

Well, if you're going to accuse people of being... *nice*, that's what you get. Crickets. ;]

I am happy to see this going up here. I enjoyed all of the various parts of the Bedtime Story when I read them at your site.
Comments from author:
--Well, if you're going to accuse people of being... *nice*, that's what you get. Crickets. ;]--

Well, a lot of people around here ARE nice.
The other ones, who haven't read this before (and are reading it now, without reviewing) are poopyheads!
(^_^)

All right, maybe nothing that bad, but a chapter post (or two, or three) greeted with utter silence can be a bit disheartening.
::Disheartened Sigh::
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
You've been updating very quickly..
and that's just great !!
Really..
I love the whole thing so I hope you give another update soon.
Happy New Year.
Comments from author:
You are a kind, wonderful, review-giving person.
^_^

Nice to hear that someone likes this; I've not been hearing much except for the crickets chirping (and Exiled being nice to me, as she always is).
I'm updating this one quickly 'cause it's done; I'm actually sitting here working on Book Three right now.

Thanks for commenting; Happy New Year.
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
This story seems different, more put together, than the last time I read it.

Thank you for sharing your time and talent.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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