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Passage to Greenleaf

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Review of chapter "Passage to Greenleaf" from (Recent Donor)kaela
Review:
I like the second chapter and I really like your use of the word prophetic at the end, it sounds foreshadowy and fits in with both the show Angel and religious Mal. Again great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm going to take this story as far as Greenleaf and see what happens. Perhaps focus on Wes and Gunn in the Firefly verse without Mal and company.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kaela] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Chance Meeting at a Bar in East Hills" from tosca
Review:
Very interesting so far. Looking forward to seeing what happens.
Review By [tosca] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Passage to Greenleaf" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
I'm really enjoying these snippets of eternal lives.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I think Wes and Gunn fit almost perfectly. More snippets to come.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Chance Meeting at a Bar in East Hills" from (Recent Donor)kaela
Review:
I read this and thought the entire story was shiny until I reached the last sentence and then I had to upgrade it to really goram shiny. Great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Shiny is of the good.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kaela] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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