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Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from Matrya
Review:
I will admit, I had my doubts. I approached this story with not a little trepidation (and very much desperation). I pictured myself helplessly Twittering in horror and continuing to read. See, I do that. I'm a Draco/Hermione fan, it's in my blood to stick with the suck. That, and long-lost-family fics tend toward the poorer.

You've proven me disgustingly wrong and blown me straight from the water, though. Physics of the Spin has been brilliant. Your plotting, your pacing, your characterisation, your style, most of your grammar (Note: Muphry's Law is now in effect. Affect? Gorramit, Muphry!) and simply the entire package. I have seriously not been this impressed by a Stargate-verse crossover fic in a good long while and am chuffed to find that you are so magnificently, fantastically brilliant.

Now, I can see this happening. I needed to be talked into it a bit, but you managed that beautifully (and the banner with Rodney and Rory gave me a visual push) and with aplomb. Rory's journey is grasping, intelligent and beatific and you seem to manage to frame the story with such a delicate piping of scientific theory. That you don't insist to go into fine detail is on-point - this is Rory's journey, it feels like, and having the tease of the theory there feels more natural than a schematic, so-to-speak, of fictional theoretical physics. (Or even real theoretical physics - I am unaware your educated background on the matter.)

The most engaging bits are while we are in Rory's head. While your Rory is different from the one we see in canon, you account for that and I can very much see that girl we knew getting to this girl were knowing in a fairly basic step-frame process. I am giddy to see where you take this character on her journey. One qualm I could say, a minor criticism, is that Rory's speech seems somewhat stiff, even accounting, but it is minor and may just be my reading.

Your other characters are...perfect. Your Vala...well, I do hope we see her again, the same as Daniel. McKay and Sheppard are so well pitched. So many people try to soften McKay's edges or to play-up Sheppard's *ahem* obvious male attributes. You play them off of one another and everyone else with such a sanguine canon-honesty that I really cannot applaud you enough. Rory and Sheppard felt like an amazingly natural progression while the father/daughter relationship between Rory and McKay has enough awkwardness to feel honest but not so much as to flounder in the reality.
Review By [Matrya] • Date [8 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from tryingtobestine
Review:
This is an excellent story! I hope you write more
Review By [tryingtobestine] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from ozseaside
Review:
Arrrrrgggghhhhhh!!@!!@
Good I wish your muse would visit you again!

Subtle aren't I?
Review By [ozseaside] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from RogueAngel
Review:
I've lost track of how many times I've come back and read this story. It's kinda so it hasn't been updated in so long. Rory just seems to be forever stuck hanging there, she really needs to find her feet. Plus it seems kinda evil to give abit of John/Rory, then give them a problem with them not being able the resolve it. But that may just be my inner fan girl. I really do hope you come back and update this.
Jess
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from ananova
Review:
I'm really loving this story and can't wait to read more. Why do I have the feeling that Rory and John's "mistake" are going to result in more permanent consequences? Like a baby? I'm just picturing Rodney finding out that Rory is pregnant and going nuts before learning that John is the father.

And you're doing a great job with all of the relationships and the twists in their thoughts and feelings. Great job.

I hope you're still writing and getting the reviews. I know this hasn't been updated in a long time but I really can't wait to read more.
Review By [ananova] • Date [17 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from tealruby
Review:
It was great to re-read this story again, hopefully one day there will be more added.
Review By [tealruby] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Doubt Your Commitment To Sparkle Motion" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Re-reading this again for the fourth or fifth time, and still enjoying it very much, unfinished as it is. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Could you please continue this fantastic crossover?
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from EasterCat
Review:
It pains me that this story has been abandoned as it was really good with the right blend of most everything.

Still, I'd like to thank you for the work you did accomplish.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from bucksavage
Review:
I know you've likely heard this time and time again, but I really was getting into this story, only to find it abandoned. It's a shame, because it introduced me, in a slight way to the Gilmore Girls-verse, a show I never watched and now I find myself getting to know a few characters and I was getting into the tale.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from Goned
Review:
This is amazing and I am heartbroken that you seem to have abandonted it. Please come back to this story
Review By [Goned] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from khimeraus
Review:
What happened? You really really must continue this story (please...?)
please
please
please
please
.....
Review By [khimeraus] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from Xayian
Review:
Third time through and I still love this story. :0) Now I'll have to leave the rest to my imagination.
Review By [Xayian] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Freud Would Have A Field Day" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I love this story...but it's been YEARS since the last update.

Please do more!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twentieth Century Boy" from ganainm
Review:
This is my third time reading this story, and I enjoyed it as much this time as I did previously. Thanks again for writing this, and all the best!
Review By [ganainm] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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