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Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from burmafrdnow
Review:
Really hope you update this soon.

Thinking about Joyce coming back and trying to off Hank. That did not seem like Joyce or the 1st.

Sounds like we have some other players in the game.

As I said previously there is lots of canon about Sineya being WAY older then 1300 BC. So that is some kind of trick or the like. Travers would not be trying to help- not that DB.

And I have to laugh at the idea of a Slayer becoming what Travers (or what was appearing as travers) claimed they would.

By the way remember the Mehdi protecting a slayer for 12 years? If what Travers claimed was true, they would have spotted signs of it after her living that long.

So lots of holes in that.

Now as regards the first and the idea of buffy dying to rebalance things- if this had happened right after Buffy had been resurrected that might be a possibility; but after all this time and the Mothra sized butterflies that have appeared there is no way her dying now no matter in what way would rebalance things.

So I have come to the conclusion you have added some new players to the game.

You need to think on that- the more complicated you make things the less logical and believable they become and then you start having people shake their heads. So adding more new players at this stage might not be the best idea.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Just wandering when you will be getting back to this great story. Please update soon!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from batzulger
Review:
Rereading this again. I really like your take on Rainbow and Ryan.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from burmafrdnow
Review:
RE reading it again and that is STILL BS. As was said Sineya was clearly someone that came a long time before 1300 BC. Whistler would be the messenger. So there are so many holes in that story it makes a collander look like an armored vault.

Kind of curious about 'Joyce'
That did NOT seem like the First- especially the part about showing its thoughts. So is there a third player in the game?

Between Joyce and Travers it really sounds like something else is going on. And I did not think that the First could transport someone. Still incorporeal and having to use stooges.

Liked the Lincoln touch.

Hope another update is coming soon.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [18 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from burmafrdnow
Review:
A fair amount of what this thing said is BS. Trying to claim the Slayer is only about 3000 years old. Buffy's dreams of the First Slayer piss on that.

And if Vampires and Demons had been around with nothing to fight them up to 1300 BC which is long after there are written languages ---


I would say about 70% of that was total BS. Not to mention why wasn't Whistler doing the visiting?

Not credible at all
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from JoeDineen
Review:
The thing that struck me on the info from Travers was if they activate al the slayers would that consume the Old one?
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from eriktheviking
Review:
A big surprise even if it is of questionable veracity.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from AlphaBeta
Review:
YYYYAAAAAA!!!!! Update! I would not be surpised if what that guy said to Clark was a half truth. Anyways, if at all possible, update more often. I've been a long time fan of this serices and just can't get enough of it.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from war
Review:
Leave it to Fred to not recognize who the President is.

Interesting info on the origins of the slayer(if it's true) it will be interesting to see what John does with it.

Can't wait to read Faith's reaction when they tell her she's being paroled and is gonna be working with Buffy and Willow.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Gladius
Review:
Welcome back! Please, keep it up!

Hmmm, interesting ... now we just need to know if 'Travers' actually knew what he was talking about ...

As for the date of the creation of the Slayer, we already know that our knowledge of history is completely wrong ... why should iron shackles and cotton robes be an indication of recent times? Maybe they went out of fashion 5000+ years ago, and only recently came back in ...

On the other hand, I had a tribble going in my head that maybe the Watchers only came into existance in the 1600s, taking control of the Slayer, killing off her supporters and turning her from a leader into a tool ...

:D
Review By [Gladius] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What has Gone Before" from BaronScrewtape
Review:
Good stuff.
Please keep writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I intend too.
Review By [BaronScrewtape] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Recent Donor)ginvirus
Review:
I Love this crossover, please update.

Happy writing.
Comments from author:
Your wish, my command.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ginvirus] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Excellent story!

I also have to admire your fortitude! Almost 10 years on a single story thread (You still haven't 'engaged the borg... uh... er... Initiative' from the first story ;) ) and you are still going strong!

Loved the scene with Lincoln... and I think the First messed up in not making /sure/ Hank Summners was dead... And btw... was his wife somehow tied into all of this and supposed to have been keeping him uninvolved for a specific reason???

Was always a little disappointed that there wasn't a Buffy/Charmed crossover ep since they were on the WB at the same time... Thought that perhaps Phoebe and the post Doyle Cordy would have gotten on together infamously!
Comments from author:
You are likely right, I don't think the universes meshed very well though. Plus Piper and Buffy in the same area would have led to a lot of fireworks.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from fayefree
Review:
Yeah new chapter. Just got out of the hospital and found this, you made my day. I was a good chapter too, just to short. You spoil me with longer chapters for Rainbow over Sunnydale. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Glad I could help out. I think the 2K chapters help me get stuff out more, though I slacked off in June/July. The weather was so hot and I had reactivated my City of Heroes account, so it was partly heat, and partly me playing hooky.
Review By [fayefree] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
love to read an update, thank you. really enjoy the twist and turns that keep coming. thank you, again, for the fun read.
Comments from author:
You're quite welcome. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [10 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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