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Review of chapter "Your Desire" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you get inspired to expand or write a sequel to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::

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"Are You Pondering What I'm Pondering?"
"I think so, Brain, but isn't a cucumber
that small called a gherkin?"
- Pinky and the Brain
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Your Desire" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
What that's it? I want to see Mystique and Spike get violent.
Sorry, i tend to whine, when I review. I was good, next time you do a one chapter story, expand a bit add some dialogue. Cause this actually sounds more like the prologue to a story, rather than a one-shot story.
Comments from author:
prolog, hmm? hmm....

wait, no more starting new stories until I finish a couple more WIP's. I have to many WIP"s already. But I might come back to this...
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Nov 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Your Desire" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
I can totally buy this pairing the way you've set it up. Spike would indeed be intrigued by Mystique and her charms, and the chip only sweetens the deal. Very true to Spike's internal thoughts, to his conflicts of interest, so to speak. Nicely done.

houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Jul 03] • Not Rated
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