I dont know why Ive never tried a Riley story before. Im glad I decided to check this one out. It has good start drawing you in with the familiar. Than takes in with a good twist. I like what you have so far and hope that maybe one day you choose continue it.
Original! Even in the crossover world it's rare to find an idea that stands apart and remains intriguing the way you have managed with this. Hope you get a chance to continue. . .
Review By [Ryjee] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I just stumbled across this story and I'm really enjoying it. I love the way you've written Riley - we so rarely see him out of his element like this, while also being as intense and thoughtful as he is in canon. I hope we'll see more of this soon.
Love it! I love the way its put together, the way you've gotten inside Riley's head. You've got his character down too, and factored in that he's a soldier, therefore methodical, and more mature than he was when he was bluesing round SunnyD. Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
Review By [Stranger] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]