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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
Poor Korbin. He keeps falling in love with girls made of pure, perfect energy. Thankfully, Dawn seems to be lastin longer than LeeLoo.


Sweet ficlet.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. :)
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oranda
Review:
Really great story. I just love Fifth Element and Korbin's perspective was cool to read. Thanks for putting it out there.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!!
Review By [Oranda] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Speechless. So very good that I need a cool shower or my hubby to come home NOW.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! :D
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluejello
Review:
May I just say, "Awwww!"?
Comments from author:
*grin*

Thank you!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)jedibuttercup
Review:
Hey, someone besides me writing in this fandom. Hurrah! =)

Lovely story. As romantic as the ending of the movie is, LeeLoo and Korben come from such different worlds, it's easy to imagine it falling apart as you portray, and then what afterward? I liked your use of Dawn here, too.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

This was a fun fandom to play in. I might have to revisit it someday soon. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting. I was expecting immortal Dawn, actually. Worth expanding or continuing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. :)

I don't know whether I'll continue or not. We'll just have to wait and see.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MinaLynn
Review:
Wonderful, beautiful story! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!!
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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