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Review of chapter "Preparing For War" from spacey
Review:
this is somehwat unique so kudos for that. i find myself havintg difficulty understanding xander's actions and motivations but then i'm a terrible preditor so maybe that's okay
Comments from author:
lol! Thanks for the comment. If it makes you feel any better, *I* don't even know his motivations for the stuff he's doing. These things just come to me and I write them, but I'm having bad writer's block at the moment, but I'm hoping to get somewhere more with this come the next month or so. So fingers crossed.
Thanks again for the review, it's very much appreciated. :)
Review By [spacey] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparing For War" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
So cool! This is so awesome! I love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you're enjoying this.

Everything's a little crazy right now, but I'll try and update as soon as I can.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparing For War" from kayron
Review:
Xander has been keeping his group and hyena enhanced staus a secret from Buffy and the others. If they all go after the Initiative, Xander's pack will be exposed. Buffy has a bad habit of slay first, and then slay again. She's going to want to strip Xander of the hyena or banish him. I don't think she'd try to kill him, but then again she might not consider him human anymore. Although, Xander was right when he said that the Initiative wouln't consider ANY of them human. Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment.

I had thought of that, don't worry. I hope I'm not going to disappoint you with what comes along next. I'll update it as soon as I can.
Review By [kayron] • Date [31 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preparing For War" from speediebuffy
Review:
I love this story...update soon!
Comments from author:
I promise to update ASAP. Cross my heart and everything.
Review By [speediebuffy] • Date [31 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thanksgiving Turkey" from MavenAlysse
Review:
Hey. Thanks for the clarification. Makes a lot of sense. I'm really enjoying the story (even if Xander as a torturing s.o.b. is kinda icky).
Catch ya on the flip side.

-MavenAlysse
Comments from author:
Hey, no problem, and thanks for the comment. Sorry it took me so long to get back - I've been really busy with college. Hopefully I'll get a new chapter up in a few days or a little after Christmas day. Until then... :D
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thanksgiving Turkey" from julieqt
Review:
I'm really enjoying this, i love Hyena Xander. Thankyou
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I'm hoping it'll only get better from here. :)
Review By [julieqt] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thanksgiving Turkey" from kayron
Review:
Xander certainly is an alpha, and a mighty fine actor too. He has to be, because these people are supposed to be his friends, yet they notice no changes in him. I like it that Xander has this whole life, and fighting group, of his own. He doesn't have to rely on the Scoobies for everything. Especially since they tend to forget about him unless they need him. Thanks for updating. This is a really good story.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I'm having a little trouble writing chapters at the minute as I'm real busy with college and getting my uni stuff sorted out but I'll update it ASAP. :D
Review By [kayron] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting Your Match" from MavenAlysse
Review:
This has been a fun read so far. I'm only familiar with Supernatural through fanfiction, but I liked the interaction between the Winchesters and the Pack.

I always thought Xander wore masks, this has been the best one ever! Being that Xander and the others are still possessed, how come Buffy hasn't sensed anything wigsworthy?

Also: who's Mercedes? You've mentioned her in at least two of the chapters.

Thanks for sharing! I look forward to further installments.

-MavenAlysse
Comments from author:
Originally, I had thought Mercedes was Rhonda's name. Oops. I hadn't realised I'd kept writing in her name, but I've rectified it now. Thanks for pointing it out!

Also, I'm very very glad you're liking this story. I'm trying to update as quickly as possible, but I'm having a little writers block with this story :(
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [25 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Going Home" from Rivana
Review:
I love Xander with the multiple personalities thing, never know which mask he'll pull. Wonderful. :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Just wait; he gets a little more all over the place in future chapters. I hope you continue to enjoy him then!
Review By [Rivana] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going Home" from danyaelofazkaban
Review:
I love the pack mentality of the group and how they all confer to Xander as Alpha. I'm looking forward to what happens next!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying it. I'll update as soon as I get a moment.
Review By [danyaelofazkaban] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Information Sharing" from kayron
Review:
I like this story. It's not about a bunch of kids running wild, it's an actual pack. Xander is the alpha, and he leads a team. RHONDA was actually able to take the Winchesters out! The interaction with the Winchesters was interesting, are they going to be meeting characters from other fandoms too? I'll check back.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying it. I have had a huge case of writers block lately that I'm just getting over.
Sorry, but I don't think I'm going to cross over into any other fandom. I don't think I'm ready to cross more that two without making them suck.
Thanks for your support though, it's greatly appreciated! :D
Review By [kayron] • Date [22 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dinner" from Rivana
Review:
I'm in love.

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This is perfect so far. Just the way I like 'em. Hope you get ride of the block soon, I can't wait to read more. Alpha Xander is one of my biggest fannish weaknesses and you do him soooo well.
Comments from author:
I hope that when I can finally get this story on the move you'll still enjoy Alpha Xander.

I'm glad you're really enjoying it so far.
I've got so many stories to upgrade (other websites) and a HUGE college project to do. I'm a bit troubled. Rest assured, though, half term is coming up so HOPEFULLY I can add a few more chapters on my story.

Again, thanks so much for the great review :D
Review By [Rivana] • Date [18 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dinner" from kayron
Review:
Hyena pack and Supernatural hunters. That makes for an interesting pitstop during a summer road trip. Xander living a secret life from the Scoobies is interesting too.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment. Hope I can keep you interested in the rest of the story, too.
Review By [kayron] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dinner" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is really great. I love the hidden life that Xander and the others are leading. I really like the idea of Xander and Dean, though Xander/Dean/Sam would be even better.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Sorry it's taken me a while to get back to you - I keep forgetting to check to see If I've got new reviews.
Hmm. Xander/Dean/Sam, huh? I'll have to keep that in mind. ;)
I'm glad that you've like it so far, and I promise to update as soon as I've got enough time.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dinner" from speediebuffy
Review:
I love it! Please continue
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it so far.
Have no fear - it WILL be updated. I'm already writing a new chapter for it, but it won't be posted for a bit until I can get everything sorted at college. As soon as I'm able, I promise I'll add to my story.
Review By [speediebuffy] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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