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Laundry Day

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Review of chapter "Laundry Day" from manic
Review:
I'm enjoying the series. Loved Oz's visit and how John and Faith start doing laundry together.
Review By [manic] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Laundry Day" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Okey dokey, here with go with the back story! :-D I love the way you've intercut Faith's impressions of her life to date with doing laundry in Atlantis. Concise, poignant and vivid.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Laundry Day" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Lovely interlude!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Laundry Day" from NaiveGhost
Review:
I reading these as quickly as I can.
I love them!
You write very well!
This one gave me goosebumps, too!

Keep writing!
;-)
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Laundry Day" from Starbright
Review:
I love this:

-- She’s not entirely sure when, but somewhere along the line, laundry went from chore to a sort of unwind time. A quiet space where things settle, are simple and steady, and she doesn’t have to think if she doesn’t want to. --

Everyone needs that time. Faith might be a super-bitch on wheels, but she's still just a girl. It's nice to see the calmer side of Faith every now and then. Great job, like always. :)
Comments from author:
*Blushes and doffs hat* Thank ye kindly, ma'am! (Pause. Am I addressing a ma'am or a sir - curse you anonymous Internet!)

In any case, I figured the same thing - and Faith's affinity is in fact something I can relate to, the laundry's my wind-down time too.

Thanks again for the review, always much appreciated.
Review By [Starbright] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Laundry Day" from link
Review:
I like the way you write the story. My favourite part is when Faith use the apron for weapon cleaning. Apron and Faith does not belong in one sentence after all :)
Review By [link] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Laundry Day" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
My heart, what's left of it, goes 'oh...cute'
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Laundry Day" from DOOMSDAYBRUNETTE
Review:
As a general rule I tend to like the funnier stuff better but this was nice. Well written and nicely poetic without being too sappy or overly flowery-ish or wordy.

I hope this isn't the end. Finding out exactly what happens to Ford and if there's anything going on with Faith and Sheppard would be great!
Comments from author:
It is by no means the end; I'm having too much fun!
Review By [DOOMSDAYBRUNETTE] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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