Review of chapter "A God of Death comes to the Mouth of Hell" from DarkGoddess
Review:
I laughed at Adam's robotic parts getting viruses from Internet porn. I was a little disappointed to not see Caleb get his name written, though. Overall a very nice fic for only being written in the space of two hours.
Review By [DarkGoddess] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A God of Death comes to the Mouth of Hell" from AkatsukiDaybreak
Review:
That was good, if a bit short, but I'm not complaining because I tend to write fairly short stories as well. I like the premise of Xander finding a Death Note, though I wonder what would happen if say, Willow found it and used it after Tara was killed. Don't you love those little bursts of inspiration that cause you to write stories like this.
Review By [AkatsukiDaybreak] • Date [29 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A God of Death comes to the Mouth of Hell" from dogbertcarroll
Review:
Too short. It barely scratches the surface of what's possible and skips the most important parts to point out the inconsequential ones like who's written in the book.
Comments from author:
I have been busy with Scourge of Time as stated below. The Sunnydale Episodes are just Filler like a couple seasons of Naruto. Finally, no body reviewed for Sunnydale Characters or Plots.
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [29 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A God of Death comes to the Mouth of Hell" from AzureDragon
Review:
A good story, I just wish it had been longer. I think it could've been really interesting.
Comments from author:
It was something I wrote one night. It came from one of my own challenges and I hope other people will give it a try. You or some of your friends could try to write other versions.
Review By [AzureDragon] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A God of Death comes to the Mouth of Hell" from Rebelgirl
Review:
I don't know that anime, my boyfriends only just started getting me into me into it again, but that was highly amusing.
Trust Xander to find THAT book on the Hellmouth.
Cushsty!
Review By [Rebelgirl] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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