This was absolutely wonderful! I seriously enjoyed the Dawn/House banter... a lot. The snark is high with them! :-) I also loved the cameo with Faith and Xander at the end. Really good story all around - Nicely done!!
Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
This is what I mean, its a good story, happened after the Epic, but is just lacking the same "punch" or whatever ineffable quality there is that the main story has. Just as the tale of Sam and Rose after the Ring is good but not great. Thanks anyway. :)
Review By [Rune] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I laughed a whole lot as I read this mad little story. For all the great and funny lines, the one that made me laugh so hard I got into a coughing fit was: “Nah, been there, voodoo is really hard to pull off safely, being shot by a porcupine, now that will make you sit up and pay attention.” Faith commented idly as she sat next to Dawn, drawing stick figures having sex on Dawn’s arm. Lots of laughter but lots of love in your story. Well done. I will just say in passing that Dawn should be spanked, preferably by Faith, for not wearing gloves. As a librarian I know how the oils on Human fingers will mess up old paper and other old writing materials. Even if they aren't poisoned.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated