ACK!! please update this soon! it's really good, and i want to know how they patch him up eventually. i know it takes time and effort to bring someone back from severe depression, and i hate it when authors fix what is set up as long-term, debilitating depression with a relationship. it wouldn't work like that!! but you seem to be putting in the effort to do it right, and i hope you keep writing, because i want to see spike get better!~
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I am working on it I promise lol. But except from those two I have here on TTH I am working on 7...no make that 8, as in EIGHT, other fanfics at the same time, of which 5 of them I am hoping to post part 1 of very soon. And then there is the fact that my mum is handicapped and I am the only one who is taking care of her, fixing her dinner, shopping clothes and stuff like that so I try to find every possible time to write at least something on ANY of those fics each day. Hope you and everyone else reading this understand that that is why I haven´t updated in so long. But as I said I am really trying to work on them a little each day :) /SF
Review By [caninelovers] • Date [6 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
hmmmmm, getting interesting........ yo, i noticed a few grammar problems (is, isn't used for a plural ;) )
and how about Adonis? sounds cool, and is Latin, but I'm not exactly sure about the meaning..........
good luck!
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Ummmm.it might help if you say in which chapter the problem is and give me an example too :) Thanks for the tip because I STILL have no idea about his middle name..... I´m too busy making the patterns for a cosplay costume I´m gonna make and a few other clothes as well so I really don´t have a lot of time left for writing on my fics (waaaahhhhh).....
This is interesting. Doesn't surprise me that Buffy is ostracizing Spike to the point she's become depressed. I hope that Albus can help Spike get better, and getting Dawn and Xander away from Buffy's and Willow's orbit will probably help both of them, too. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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I actually managed to write a full page in word today yayyyy! So I hope I can post one or two new chapters sometime this month.....
When i have writers block i watch something that inspires me, for example for a story i have over on ff.net, Cruel Intentions inspires me...
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CaliaDragons "Strength Behind an Enemy" usually inspires me but it didn't work this time... Neither did MerKats "Doomed and Loving It"........ Waaaaahhhhh!!!!!! *Runs off to watch more of season 4 of Gene Roddenberry's Andromeda*
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Have him teach History of Magic then....LOL! He should be more entertaining than Binns...
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We´ll see if I even have him as a teach at Hogwarts....... I´m having a seriously B A D case of writers block now..... I´ve written four lines in two WEEKS!!!!! Hopefully it ends veeeeeeeery soon so I can continue.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated
I have a question- will Angel be roped into teaching DADA?
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I actually haven´t even thought about it.....O_O I don´t think he will tho because soooooooo many authors have him doing it so that if I did it too then my story would loose some of its uniqueness I think.......
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Strange but surprisingly interesting. Your grammatical errors are a hoot! But the plot has potential.
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What do you mean by "Your grammatical errors are a hoot" ? I´m from Sweden so English is only my secondary language so please let me know if any sentences is wrong or something so I can change it......
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Thank you again. I have a full page in Word complete of the fifth chapter so now I only need about four more and then it´s about the same length as the others. I hope I find inspiration enough so I can have it done by the next two weeks....... Oh well, we´ll see how it goes.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
*poke* *poke* *puppy dog eyes* meeeeeyooooowwwwwww? more? please?
I really like the story, is spike a malfoy?
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I´m on it, I´m on it!!!!! LOL The third chapter is already longer than the first two and I´m not even done with it.....!!!!!!!!!!!!
And yes I´m going with the classic (by now) "Spike is a Malfoy" thingy but I´m not sure about his middle name... The fact is I´m not coming up with any good ones :(( Oh well we´ll see what I find out later hehe I think (not sure tho) I can have the third chapter done and posted in two weeks......might be longer tho..... Sowwy about the wait but since I´m taking care of my mum (she was in an accident and has trouble walking and slight memory loss) and all the cleaning,cooking and stuff + my own life I have quite limited time writing this fic. I wrote almost a full page in Word yesterday tho so at least things are moving forward.... Hope you stay with me untill the end of this fic (whenever *that* might be).
Review By [mpsshadowmaster] • Date [6 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Hey, i love this story so far, i really like SpikeAngel stories. What a way to end the chapter! You have me eagerly waiting the next one. It does irritate me that even though Buffy is with Willow she still thinks Angel is hers. I hope that Spike develops a good relationship with the Fang Gang. Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Yay! I have one more review! Thank you thank you thank you! About Spike meeting the fang gang: at the moment I still don´t know when they´ll meet but they will. About Buffy: I always thought she was a total bitch to Spike and WAYYYYYY to obsessed with Angel so you will probably see more Buffy bashing which will lead to some sweet moments between Spike and Angel :) And I still don´t know if I´ll break up Buffy and Willow (?). There is a LOT I still don´t know about this fic :( Hope you continue reading until the end whenever that will be......
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Interesting start. How come you're not using " " marks?
you used: - Guess that school did teach me something after all, mumbled Angel. intead of: "Guess that school did teach me something after all," mumbled Angel.
Comments from author:
I wanted to use the - instead of " " because I have always used the " " when someone is thinking and - when someone is speaking but the moderator apparently didn't think so so now I have to use the " " regardless of when a person is thinking or speaking. And that just sucks....
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]