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Review of chapter "WWGD (slash)" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
Oh Gibbs - you tease!!!
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stopping" from (Moderator)Demona
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Awww, wonderful job with Gibbs and Tony. And that squee for Abby - she is always so wonderful in her meddling!
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Carefully Constructed Façade" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
More reviews!! More!!

This just breaks my heart. I can't imagine growing up with a parent, a father, that didn't care enough for me to pay attention, to see and hear me.

But as much as it breaks my heart, I'm glad that Tony worked through the experience, and came out a much better man than his father.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ocean's 11" from (Moderator)Demona
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I loved each and every one of these drabbles. Great job incorporating ocean into all of them!
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Thoughts Regarding The Dead" from (Moderator)Demona
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Gibbs: Oh, poor Gibbs. Losing your family is horrible enough, but to lose them the way he did. *hugs Gibbs tightly* Note: Kelley should be Kelly *wink*

Ziva: *shudders* I can't imagine pulling the trigger and killing my own brother. Especially considering how close they were. And not being able to remember his face, except marred by the bullet hole... Poor Ziva.

Abby: Eventually things will come crashing down for her... I just hope that someone is there to catch her when she falls.

Tony: Poor Tony. I can only imagine the feeling, the realization, that it could have just as easily been him rather than Kate that died.

McGee: Nice thought to tell his thoughts via his stories. Very spot on.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Was Your First?" from (Moderator)Demona
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*shivers* That one just gave me chills.

And it doesn't surprise me in the least that Abby would be able to get the truth from Tony, or that Tony gave each person their own story based on his impression of them.

Such a wonderful little piece.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Tattoos" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
Review spamming, who me?

I love your backstory on each and every tattoo that you covered. All the tattoos on Abby's body are a mystery and it would be great to be able to hear the reasoning behind each and every one of them.

Tattoos are such personal things and each has its own meaning, reason for existing.

Great job.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thoughts of the Dead" from (Moderator)Demona
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Gibbs: I can see him trying to talk himself into believing that it was just another case, just another body, just another mystery to figure out. But then realizing that it wasn't just another someone - it was Tony - family, and that it wouldn't be easy. And this decision at the end to go to Jenny. That poor woman doesn't know what is coming to her.

Jenny: You know, as I read this, I *almost* felt sorry for her. She's come to the realization that she wasn't ready to go to as many lengths as she originally thought. And unfortunately for her, it took Tony's 'death' to make her realize that. Fortunately for Tony, he didn't die. And even though this was a well-written piece from her p.o.v. it still doesn't make me forgive her.

Abby: Jesus. I think one just ripped out my heart and stomped all over it. Seriously, the flat out denial of Abby's is just hardest to handle. It's her reasoning, her thought process, and unfortunately she knows she's going to have to go in there at some point and face the facts, the truth. Fortunately for her the truth isn't what she was thinking it was going to be.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Marked Memory (slash)" from (Moderator)Demona
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Awww, soft and semi-emotional Gibbs. *wibble* That is just perfect. It is hard to remember that under that tough as nails exterior there is a man with feelings, emotions, etc. And I'm glad that he pushed Tony to talk about it, but that he also gave him the opportunity to talk on his own terms and his own time. Great job.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hands" from (Moderator)Demona
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Awww, much love for this story. Great job with Tony's inner voice. And you did a wondeful job of describing the hands of each of the other members of the team.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "WWGD (slash)" from raven
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Going for a knife,
never created such strife!
Naughty Gibbs,
just publicly called dibs!
Review By [raven] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "WWGD (slash)" from FiveOfFive
Review:
An hour till midnight, what can I do?
Sigh and leave a rhyming review:
Your story left me with a sense of elation,
Gibbs and Tony the perfect temptation.
Poor Tony holding onto control for dear life,
While Gibbs smirked after forgetting his knife.
An embarrassed DiNozzo is something rarely seen,
But it's nothing compared to a handsy Marine.
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [14 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stopping" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I'm really enjoying these. You've got great insight into the characters and I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like my NCIS bits,
It'll be a long time before I call it quits.
The characters are great to write,
And I always try hard to make them sound right.

:-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stopping" from FiveOfFive
Review:
Hey, first real quick, you accidentally posted "Stopping" twice

And I'm not sure I minded, it gave me an excuse to read it again :-) My immediate response goes a little like this, stupid Gibbs, stupid Tony, Abby=Awesome. I love it when you explore the Gibbs/Tony relationship it gives me warm happy feelings :-D
Comments from author:
Thanks for that catch of the double post,
I like your reviews the most.
Abby does rock I must confess,
Her attitude really does impress.
Gibbs/Tony is a favorite of mine,
At I like it when their lives combine.
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Carefully Constructed Façade" from axolotl
Review:
you and your awesome! Great work, i love how you do Tony's characterization, and this is such an interesting moment that works with the Tony we know and love. ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks!! :-)
Review By [axolotl] • Date [7 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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