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Review of chapter "Prologue" from bookworm
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Hi there. I hope this review doesn't repeat itself; there was a glitch while posting, and I think it was blocked, but it's possible you'll get something similar twice after all. Anyhow, I just thought I'd let you know that if you decide to continue this story, I'd certainly read it. Obviously it's been on hiatus for a while, but you never know, right? Maybe you'll break out those DVDs again sometime. ;-)
Review By [bookworm] • Date [28 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [4 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from spring
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I love what you have so far it's wonderful. I really hope that you are able to update this fic again soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [25 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from TDWidow
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WHAT?? You can't leave it there! Come back!!
Review By [TDWidow] • Date [24 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Moderator)Saturn
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Interesting start. I didn't see the end of the first chapter coming. I'll be keeping an eye (or a tracking e-mail) out for more. :)

You did have a few misspelled words and missing words so you may want to get somebody to read it over or re-read it yourself to try and catch them.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from vargamor
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Great start..I haven't read a Ghostbuster crossover before so I can't wait to see how this goes. Frankly, I don't care if Joyce is dead or alive, doesn't matter one way or the other to me..I lost my Joyce love at Dead Man's Party and never did get it back.

I'm looking forward to seeing how you explain Dawn since she didn't actually come about until season 5, when the monks altered the memories, and you're story is set in season 2.

Also looking forward to hearing the Ghostbusters make wise cracks about the hellmouth and the slayer.
Review By [vargamor] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bluejello
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Interesting idea, I'll be looking forward to the rest!
One thing though, you need to proof-read more. There were several misspellings and word mix-ups (for example: "since" instead of "sense").
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Althalus
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This is an interesting start. I can't remember seeing any crossover with Ghostbusters before. Except in Tenhawk's East Coast Meltdown. There's not enough of those stories around :-)

I just don't like the way Joyce is treated now :-(
Joyce is a great character to balance Buffy. Especially once she gets used to the idea of her daughter as The Slayer.
But the way you phrased it at the end suggest she died in the crash. It will be interesting to see how the Scoobies (and Dawn) react to the Ghostbuster. And even more interesting to see the Ghostbuster's reaction to The Scoobies (Buffy as The Slayer) and the existence of the Hellmouth. I wonder if they now of about the Hellmouth and the Slayer or if they think it's just a legend.

Keep it up.

Harold.
Review By [Althalus] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from SaiyaSith
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Pretty good info, I think you're doing alright so far. No worries about the writing dude. Keep up the good work, 'cause I'm interested in seeing how this turns out!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from CPTSkip
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Dang! You sure started your story off with a bang! I just hope Joyce is only hospitalized as I really like her and don't like stories, even on the show, where she dies. Sigh. She's dead isn't she? Oh well, on with the story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from purrfus
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Nice start

There is probably a step program somewhere for this problem - please don't go looking until you are finished with the stories. The way the PTB work they might solve the problem by doing something horrible to your plot bunnies.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AllenPitt
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The important thing is you realize you're a story-starter. Next step is getting help....heh---
So--at the funeral Hank tells the kiddies or (more likely) phones up the Ghostbusters so he doesn't have to go to the funeral himself. Should be fun.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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