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Review of chapter "Diagon Alley" from bradsan
Review:
Oww Oliver. He is so cute.

Phoenix as a pet. Good choice very fitting and needed.

Oww Doggie gets some treats. I can't wait when Buffy tries to learn Sirius some tricks and reward him with a treat. Hilarious.

Hmm and Snape thinks Buffy will listen to him. I wonder. I know I wouldn't at this stage. Buffy never listen very well. She never did what Giles wanted. So why would she listen to all the others. One thing she always when people told her something. She listen(even when she pretend not to), take it in and uses it when useful but always goes her own way. If you know what I mean. So I wonder even after this experience, She is still Buffy.

love the update and her phoenix.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Number 12 Grimmald Place" from bradsan
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Very good update. I can't wait when she gets her wand. I loved the part where Severus burnt Lucius. Darn that man is so annoying. I got a feeling that when Buffy gets mad even Voldy has to run.

Another thing though you wrote The Weesleys but it's The Weasley's there name is Weasley and it is Lucius Malfoy and not Lucious. You wrote the most difficult names right and the easy one's wrong how did you manage that. 'LOL'

Again very good update.
Comments from author:
thank you. Sorry about the name thing I think I have fixed the errors now. Maybe in my mind Lucius likes to drink a lot and thus is a lush? OK that was bad sorry. It was kind of funny that I got his name spelled so badly.

Thank you again have a great night.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Secret Revealed." from DieselDriver
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Hard to read if you have any empathy, even though we know it is fiction. But an interesting premise as well as different from the show. I'm definitely intrigued to see what happens.

With that said I wonder about some of the figures of speech you use. For instance, I think you mean "resorted" rather than "resulted" when you say that Giles resulted to his ace in the hole. There's another spot towards the end of the chapter that I can't quite remember but it's an odd wording and I didn't understand what you meant.

Other than that an good read so far. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
Comments from author:
Thank you it was hard to write, but it also really wanted to be written up to what I have, then it is like trying to do something really difficult to continue. I know a lot of what I want to do but I am having a hard time getting the twins voices right and so forth. Of course writing in general has been really difficult for me lately.

As for the wording I think you found a typo that I corrected wrong or something. I will have to go find that spot and fix it. Sorry for the confusion there.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Izzypopplekins!" from bradsan
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Oh want to read more.

Stupid vampires don't they know that hurting somebody the way they did is difficult to forget and more important very difficult to overcome. She loved, cared and trusted them and they betrayed those part the worst way you ever can.

Buffy is claimed by two vamps from the Aurelius line could be in her benefit. It could give Buffy the best protection ever. For example when somebody tried to controll her trough mindgames or a spell her vamps connection could brake it. If she get in a dangerous situation where her life is on stake. She can call for help that sort of things. Killing the master and with Darla out of the picture vamps from the same line has to listen to her.

I can't wait when those butt headed godfathers, father and watcher gone discover that if they work together Buffy will get the best support system and back up a Slayer ever gone have.

I hope Spike and Buffy will get on good terms again after a lot off groveling. He already proved that he wants to protect her no matter what. Angel I'm not sure of he has to change to deserve Buffy's forgiveness again. Angel screwed up more than Spike has. I think.

Please update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [9 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Izzypopplekins!" from nightshadowlife
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bahahahaha LOVE it!!!!!
Can't wait to see how they fare with a Buffy shopping spree!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth." from AstridWinchester
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If you think about it, you can have her in a relationship with a minor character; such as one of the twins, Blaise Zabini, or Thoedore Nott. Or just create someone and throw him in a house.

I don't usually like AU's but this one has my interest :)
Review By [AstridWinchester] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Izzypopplekins!" from karmasfriend
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I like this! I remember reading the other one a while ago, but I enjoy this one being not quite as explicit. I'm curious how Buffy'll react when she finds out Sirius is the dog (or if she already knows). It'll be interesting to see what house she gets into!
Review By [karmasfriend] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Izzypopplekins!" from AllenPitt
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She should find magic a lot easier if she gets a wand that is actually suited to her. The custody battle looks to be fairly vicious. What age is she at this time? Wouldn't she be considered an adult in the wizarding world at 17? So.... she's 16 still?
HP still hasn't been told. He's not going to be happy that nobody ever told him he had a sister, that he needn't have been at the Dursleys. That Snape is her father will not make him happy. (Funny, if he had more info, ie what he learned in book 7, his attitude towards Snape would be quite different, of course).
Rita Skeeter will be writing lots of articles about her, probably...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Her Black Knight." from ChosenForever
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Great job. Please update soon
Review By [ChosenForever] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Her Black Knight." from Zenwoman
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This is an excellent story. I hope you haven't given up on it.
Review By [Zenwoman] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Letter and a Challenged Claim." from (Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
Interesting so far but I wanted to point out that Glory had nothing to do with Joyce's death...Joyce died of natural causes
Comments from author:
Thank you for pointing that out. However, I purposely changed how Joyce died. If you will notice there was also no Dawn, and, this entire story is pretty much A.U. Buffy certainly didn't fight the initiative with Pike and Spike, but in this twisted dimension of Buffy, she did. If stuff like that bothers you this might not be the story for you, but if you can, kick back and go with the flow. Hopefully you will enjoy the rest...if I can ever finish putting it all together.
Review By [(Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Her Black Knight." from nightshadowlife
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I love the way this story is going!!!!! Please tell us if your writing more or if your planning on coming back to this story soon!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I am still working on this, the next chapter has been driving me crazy though. I have quite a bit more written of other chapters and things planned in the future. I have a lot of stories that I am behind on right now, (I also post as Fire Dragon) and I have been having some writers block lately.

It's writing the transition from Sunnydale to England that is really holding me up. I may end up skipping it and maybe flash back if I can't get something better than what I have written together soon. Though it might take a while to string together what I have written for what happens when she gets to England. I tend to jump around a lot when I am writing.

It is so good to get reviews, they really do help me get back to work on it more. Thanks again.
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Her Black Knight." from spygrrl
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I'm sorry you are feeling well. I hope whatever your dealing with gets better soon. While I'm bummed this story might not be updated for a bit it will definitely be worth waiting for so just post whenever the muse finally cooperates. :)

Regarding my previous chapter review, if this turns out to be Spike & Buffy that would be awesome, but if it doesn't then you have to follow the direction of the story. I'd much prefer an organic relationship develope (or none at all) for Buffy than trying to forced to characters together. I'm definitely intrigued by your reply about the path you've laid our for Spike and Angel. I have to confess I do love stories where Angel goes off the deep end. And I'm not worried that it won't be well done by you.

I love in Buffy's dream how you played up the creepy aspects of Angel's personality and that fine line between Angel/Angelus/Liam. Since Angel was the hero of his own show that side never could become a major focus - it was always more about his insecurities. The dream part was really, really creepy as well. Poor Buffy. I love how that whole scene was written.

Feel better soon and I look forward to the next's update. I can't wait for Buffy to get to Hogwarts either and for more of the myster to be revealed!!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I know it has been forever but I am still working on this. I have a lot written here and there in the future but am having a hard time connecting everything that happens to Buffy together. As far as pairings, I still really don't know what the final pairing is going to be. I hope that Spike will be able to redeem himself enough, but I am not sure what will happen there. She will be trying to act normal and date, but I don't think anything will really happen (at least from Buffy's stand point) for a while. At this point I am trying to focus more on, Buffy healing, Angel falling, and Buffy's adventures in Harry Land. (overall plot stuff) This is the first story I don't have a romantic pairing decided on. There will eventually be romance, though. The mushy stuff comes naturally to me and I have to be careful not to get carried away with it.
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clem." from spk
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When I saw that there was an update, I had sincerely hoped there was another chapter. But then I realized that this was just the softer version. I say stick with the FR21 story because it was what you had originally planned. I hope we get another chapter soon. I can't wait to read more of this story. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I am definitely going to stick with the FR21 version. I was just debating if I was going to keep up with the FR18 one or not. I finally posted the next chapter. I hope you like it. It is the same in both versions. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [spk] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Clem." from spygrrl
Review:
Thanks for the explanation about what happened with Spike and Angel. I loved this chapter...poor Buffy. It was so intense and emotional, but I'm glad she finally got a chance to tell Angel off and I LOVE Faith backing Buffy up and being her protector. I'm so glad they have a good relationship in your story (so far anyway. :)). I also love that you are having Spike become the man he became during the show...I don't know if you are going in a Spike/Buffy direction with this story, but as a Spike fan I appreciate that you've shown his character respect. Same with Angel...that his actions felt true to character and weren't just character bashing. Looking forward to more. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I like Faith and Buffy having a good relationship in this story. There won't be a lot between Faith and Buffy through out the story because they will be on different continents for most of it. There will be some more with Faith and Buffy though.

Honestly, I want to make this a Spike/Buffy pairing eventually but I am not sure if it will work out that way or not. He has a lot to answer for before he will get a happy ending. I love Spuffy though, but then I love to put Buffy with just about anybody. (within reason)

I love Angel too, but sometimes he drives me nuts! I want to keep this in character but Angel will be going off the deep end even more in this story but there will be reasons for it. I have no idea what his final fate is going to be at this point.
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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