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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from maxthehobbit
Review:
I think Mrs. F was right about kicking Adam's ass. Can't have people shooting Slayers while they're trying to do their job. Mrs.F is practical in a gangster sort of way. The three witches were funny screwing up spells with strange consequences.
Good story!
Comments from author:
...and the 'Three Witches' were based on people I know at that time!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Rather intriguing plot line!! Will anyone come to realize they've got witches in the kitchen?
Comments from author:
Yes they will.

Cheers,D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [15 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from burmafrdnow
Review:
Sounds like someone is a little jealous of Buffy. With all due respect honey you know nothing. As the saying goes try walking in someone's shoes for a while before judging them. Buffy was in charge because she was The Slayer. Now she is in charge because she is the senior slayer and has been successful.

The government thing makes sense= that is what happens when you have several sections with interloping responsibilities. Someone always fails to get the word.

Giles has a point about governments- WHEN you are talking top level. That is why you make your contacts at mid level- those people are around for decades. Would be interested in what you meant about the changes in the US Government- I really hope you are not using that garbage known as Season 8 (barf).
Comments from author:
As the saying goes; walk a mile in the other persons shoes...when you stop you're a mile away from them and they're bare foot!

This story was posted ages ago! Originally I think it was posted before Season 8 came out, I've never followed S8 as I think most fanfic authors could have done it better.

Thank-you for reading and reviewing this old fic of mine. It's nice to know people are still reading them.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from JohannaMK
Review:
An interesting story; I've just read the whole lot in one sitting.
I was wondering if the eggs would be related to Cthulu (not into it myself, but I know a lot of people who are, so I picked up the reference).
The bit about the magic bookshop being on the other side of the road - a touch of Soul Music perhaps?
I shall be working my way through the rest of the series over the next few days.
Comments from author:
Cheers, thanks for reading.

It's a well known fact that Magic bookshops/music shops tend to move around all the time (actually I've noticed that shops in general tend to move without warning!)

Reposting 'Old Dogs' another Slaughtered Lamb/London Slayers tale.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [JohannaMK] • Date [17 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Mcspender
Review:
I was waiting to see the entire posted history to review, and dude, it was worth the wait.

It was a good contrast to see the humanitarian way the Doctor tried to solve the situation vs. Ripper shoot things to death attitude.

And the Witches 3, they sure are a riot!. Got any special plans about them, maybe a visit from a Seattle witch ;)???.

The ehm, special way that Silvia solved the... small misunderstanding was harsh, but necessary; and yeah, it makes sense the way she uses the vamps to get more money for the operation.

Cool series dude =).
By the way, when it comes to paranoia, one of my idols is the famed FBI agent Fox W. Mulder; I mean it's not paranoia when they are really trying to get you =S.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Re; Silvia being harsh...see my comment to Marcus R.

Three witches will have a much bigger roll in a fic soon.

Let you into a secret; the Doctor was wrong! Giles was right (you wouldn't know this unless you've played Call of Cthulhu) Chtholians (or however you spell it) are evil, not nice, unpleasant. I have a problem with the way they're writing the Doctor these days and this was my own little way of 'having a go'. The Doctor will return at some point as will the much improved S2 Torchwood.

As always thanks for the review.
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
This was a good story, hope there is s sequel to it. Also hope Fitzsimons will wither get turned to the good side or killed. SHe really turned out to be a evil villian.

Good work!

Wispr
Comments from author:
There will be sequel's to this one. I think 'evil' is a little harsh for poor old Silvia, she's only doing things the way she knows how. Her moral compass might be off a little, maybe Giles will be able to put her back on track?
We'll have to wait to see.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice solution - Harsh but fair.
Comments from author:
Thank-you...we aim to please. At least no one got their head nailed to a coffee table!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from gogreer
Review:
I am liking this new version of the story. The earlier version seemed a bit off from the Giles that I knew. I can see how the "Ripper" who overlook this. Her behind the scenes deals with vampires, on the other hand, might not go over so well, though, hehe.

Having Faith come over would be very cool, I think. She has that whole "bad girl" thing going and probably wouldn't be shocked by Silvia's operation. Certainly the whole Scooby gang has demonstrated necessity trumps law on occasion.

I can almost picture the scene when Faith walks into the bar.....I hope I get to read it...

Keep up the good work...
Comments from author:
Thank-you, glad you enjoyed. Yes I took into account what people said about Giles first time round. at the time I was trying to make a point but it sorta didn't work out...I prefer this version of Giles. Maybe we'll see a bit from his past as this series goes on. And yes one day Faith will turn up, I've only written Faith once(other than a few lines here or there) and it didn't turn out too bad...I must be brave and bite the bullet.

I have a whole list of xovers to do in this series...its just finding the time to do it in between writing other xovers.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [gogreer] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Yay - Cthonians and the Doctor! Looking forward to more! And thanks for the link to the Monster Mash video, it's better than others I've seen (I really prefer the Bonzo Dog version, but nobody seems to be setting Buffy vids to it)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2fXUe-dmy0
Comments from author:
The Bonzo's did a version of Monster Mash!?!? Don't remember that one...oh hang on maybe...?

It came to me a wee while ago that Cthulhu Monsters and the whole Cthulhu thing was well adapted to BtVS xovers, and if you've got the Rule Book (like me) it tells you exactly what they're capable of (sorry but I like to know what I'm dealing with). One of thse days I'm going to convert a Slayer to Cthulhu game stats just to see what one would be like.

Anyway thanks for the review,

Dave.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Really enjoying you characters in this story... can't wait to see what happens between Giles and the Doctor!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank-you-you say the nicest things. I only hope I can live up to your expectations!

All the best.
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
This story is a fine illustration of what is quite a well known fact: Slayers are extremely difficult to kill.

Evidence of this can be seen in the way that both Amanda and Trish are fighting their way back into the story, despite your dastardly attempts to eradicate them from existence, and replace them with these puppets from your shadowy Seattle training camp!

Edit: Having read the next 3 chapters, I see Trish wasn't a typo, but Amanda lives!
Comments from author:
Well Trish was never going to go. Poor old Amanda did die at Sunnydale and unfortunately she just wouldn't fit in with my re imaginings. However you have just given me an idea for a possible future plot twist...I'll say no more at the moment.

I was never quite happy with these stories in their old form; but rest assured the Wombles will return!!!! MAW-HA-HA!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Really doing a bang up job with the blending of BTVS and Doctor Who. The interesting twist you have to the characters is very refreshing and nice. Can't wait to see where you take the plot line!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank-you for that. I was a bit worried about my treatment of the good Doctor (I have 'issues' with the way they write him these days).

More today ends on Wednesday.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Mcspender
Review:
Cool set of chapters dude!.
The inclusion of the good Doctor really improves the mystery, and the MI-5 team is gonna be for the ride of their lives.
Any chance to see miss Silvia vs. a code V ???.

By the by, haggish good, whiskey better... hangover bad =(.
And happy New year to you too Dave =).
See ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Hi There,

Silvia v Code V: Definitely but in a different story. I will explore why Slayers don't hunt Code 5 and what Codes 1-4 are!

So you tried the Haggis eh? Whiskey? Oooops! ok in small quantities. Happy new Year? Another triumph of hope over experience! Sorry I'm a bit jaded. Lets just say that I hope this year won't be any worse than last...even that's a bit optimistic...excuse me while I slash my wrists. Here I am mind the size of a planet... Did you know Marvin the Paranoid Android is one of my heroes?

Glad you enjoyed the fic, more on Friday.

All the best (we should be so lucky),
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Really like this story, love the depth you have with your characters. Can't wait for more!


Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank-you that's a very nice thing to say!

More on Friday.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from AllenPitt
Review:
I'm picturing Dr Who talking with the council --yep, he'd drive those stuffy repressed types up the wall in short order.... Nice touch with the 2 Tylers'... How embarrassing if she ends up killing him by mistake. Oops!
Talk about the right & left hands not knowing what each other is doing--the MI investigation would get quashed instantly if the right people knew about it... As is--I'd think Giles would look like a child molester--went to be a school librarian, always travels with young girls, and all that... add in not just the explosions, but he's been on the scene for a LOT of unsolved murders: the guy that the demon Eyghon killed; Jenny Calendar; the list goes on--
Comments from author:
Comments on Giles: Gods yes I think I'll make more of this in later stories in this series...thanks for the idea...time to do some research on Giles!

2 Tyler's: Pure accident, but I thought, why not it's bound to come in handy one day, looks like I was right.

Spooks: Don't know whether you've seen S8 of Spooks but it suggests that there's a lot more going on than meets the eye. Could mean another Spooks fic in the future we'll have to see.

Thought provoking review here, thanks.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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