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Review of chapter "Xander, you have alot of explaining to do..." from
GundumM Review:
just average
Comments from author:
I know, I'm not happy with the way they are coming out yet... I'm gunna try other blondes, maybe I can do better characterizations of a few other people, I feel like Izzie came out really flat...
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GundumM ] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, you have alot of explaining to do..." from
CPTSkip Review:
Lol! Some homonym problems i.e. "you're" when you meant "your", but your story amused me. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
my bad! i'm usually a stickler for those...thanks though...fixing now...
Review By [
CPTSkip ] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elliot and her Ken doll" from
Bobboky Review:
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Bobboky ] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elliot and her Ken doll" from
Micah Review:
Umm, where are the other 4 blondes?
Comments from author:
the next chapters silly
Review By [
Micah ] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elliot and her Ken doll" from
CPTSkip Review:
I liked, but where are the other four blondes? I hope this story isn't really ended.
Comments from author:
wow it's like I forgot how to post a new story since I haven't in soooo long! Sorry about that!
Review By [
CPTSkip ] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated