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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CindyB
Okay, I'll admit that I squirmed as I read this, but the ending left me going "No to the Sara love"..."Maybe I'll wait to see what else happens". Anyway, I love Grissom & Catherine. I'll look forward to reading a story with them in it.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zigpal
Wow, that was intense. I guess Sara wants to be the only one to bad mouth Catherine.
Comments from author:
Of course, she thinks she's the only one with good reason to do so.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KnightWulf
liked the story and loved sara's response to what the guy said do you think you could write a follow up or even anothr story please.
Comments from author:
Sorry, no follow up.
I'm sure that I'll write another but not in the near future. Sorry
Glad you enjoyed it though. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheatricalBarrister
That was pretty intense. I wasn't entirely convinced that someone who would be (at least outwardly) charming enough to be dating Catherine would be quite so rude as to make those particular comments to a woman who knew her, but then again, I'm sure there are men like that. Either way, I liked Sara's response.

The other thing that bothered me about the scenario was the amount of booze Sara was knocking back. Right now in the US, most bars are pretty concerned about wrongful death lawsuits if someone gets way too drunk and then dies in some type of accident. I know that people are still served too much, too often, but drinking a whole bottle of whiskey by oneself is pretty much a cause for concern ;-).

I really enjoyed reading this (well, not so much enjoyed -- being so dark and all -- but it is well written). But I did want to point out the 2 things that gave me pause when I read it.
Comments from author:
I just love your reviews =)

To answer your two outpointed things (just for the hell of it)

I don't know about the guys where you're from but around here guys that think they're blown off tend to react that way to soften the blow to their ego..

As for the drinking.. Again, I don't know how it is in US (thanks to your review I've got a pretty good idea, so thanks for that) but here, well, you drink what you want, when you want, how much you want... as long as you can show cash... or at least the bars I know of.

Anyhoo, thanks for reviewing =)
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [23 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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