Very nice. I think Buffy should be wary but listen to his advice. She should have grown as well. It always pisses me off when people make her and Faith the same childish people they were in Sunny Hell. They would have changed and grown. I do have to say that it is possible she might stillplay the ditzy blonde with vamps but other than that not so much. Hell she has a high IQ even if she down plays it. As for Jack and Carter I say pair them up and maybe have happy accident. I mean really sometimes even the oblivious need a push. Maybe have Loki have a hand in it lol. Jack and Carter need kids a lot. As for Jon well he needs a match as well.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [25 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very interesting take on Jon you have here. I'm curious to learn more about how the Furlings fit into the Slayer myth, and to see Buffy's conniption fit over having Jon take over. Hope your muse comes back and you update soon!
Review By [AmarinRose] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It doesn't matter if its the first story you have written or the tenth-a well written story is a treasure shared with all. This is well written with a unique paring with mini jack and the slayers. I will be tracking this story so as to not miss anything. So thank you for sharing and Happy New Year.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind review.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Saw your new fic so I started reading your old ones first.
Enjoyed this a lot, its a better mini-jack fic with a Jon who has his own voice and I'm looking forward to the mixing with the SG verse told from the Buffy side.
Please continue this fic and thanks for sharing Richard3116
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind encouragement I do intend to finish all my fics soon. It's a weeks worth of sitting and writing the two more of checking and re-checking and adjusting work as reviewers point out the problems.
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I like the way this story is building so far. Very nice presentation of Jon's skills and knowledge, I think you found a perfect way to fit him into the story. I loved that Jack decided to establish contact wit Jon again, he really isn't the tip of guy to leave a man behind. I liked the twist with the Furlings and the slayer dream was really appropriate, I'm presuming that the two year old in the dream was Jon. Your Xander so far was very believable and it's good that you decided to bring him in the story as a more mature guy, it just makes seance. As for Buffy, maybe it would be good that she at first felt that Jon is trying to take away her role as a leader, but he would find a way to set her mind at ease relatively fast. Can't wait to see more, especially when the Furlings take a greater part of the story....
More, more, please. I caught this story once before, but I've picked up more depth in my framework of knowledge of Mini-Jack and I enjoyed the story more this time around. Any chance of your adding more chapters anytime soon? The Furling in the Slayer Dream was *very* interesting, and I can't wait to find out where things go from here. Particularly the suspicion that the little boy in the dream was Mini-Jack. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
More, more, please. I'm waiting for Spike to join them in the upcoming chapters if I read the SG27/Thanksgiving story right. This is interesting, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Interesting chapter. I'm wondering how SG-1 is going to take the situation, since they haven't had the "Need to Know" about the interesting things Earthside.
Thank you for your review and I'll try my best to get something posed in the next week or so. But it will be unbetad because my beta is busy with work for the next month or so.
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