Omg. I just found this and its amazing. I love it. Please continue it :)

Yay, new chapter.

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This is a rather interesting story. I love it so far. I did go and see Sweeney Todd, I don't think I caught Peter though, I do have to admit that it's been a rather long time since I saw that movie. I look forward to the next installment of this story.

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Great story! I hope you update it soon.

lol, it's nice to see someone actually making Draco THINK. He might actually grow a bit. I'm really looking forward to just how that duel went, and how the other Slytherins react to it.

well once I come unstuck.. I think you will see some interesting reactions

I am already looking forward to read any future chapters you might get inspired to this story.

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Excellent chapter. The duel should be interesting if it happens.

Looking forward to more.

Well, some interesting ideas. I'm pretty sure you mean a Duel rather than dual (two/two faced). I'm not sure if you mean to have Willow connected to Severus or to Lilly biologically... and the crone earlier in the story seemed to indicate that if Willow deviated she'd kill Giles... so maybe an overhaul all together. It also was implied that Giles had to have sex with her (the Crone).

Thanks for sharing.

thanks of course duel!!!

and will be a few twists and turns in this story

Still trying to figure out what is going on, but enjoying the glimpses.

hee hee

An interesting story, though I'm having some trouble following the details, especially towards the ages. In the fifth year of Hogwarts students are supposed to be something like 15, right? But willow is 20-22 by the end of the 6th season of Buffy, which is well post graduation for the Rowlingverse.


Also, in Chapter 3 you say she's taking a class on Divinity? I wasn't aware that Wizards had a religion. Or that Willow would enroll, given that she's Wiccan at this point, and that neopagan faiths have a rather different view of the divine than traditionalist faiths that the term divinity conjures.

ahhh I think perhaps you are looking a tad too deeply

re age - if you re read the chapter where Severus meets her for the first time. Dumbledore mentions that though she is really a seventh year student (her fake papers) - however due to her so called eccentric home schooling will take remedial classes So thats why she is all mixed classes some 1st, some 5th etc...

as a seventh year that would be 18 and I reckon she could carry that off, her worldliness might be attributed to being american ;-)

re class on divinity at this stage Willow couldnt care less what classes she takes, looking at tea leaves is as good a way as any.

A duel is probably a bad idea. She's already struggling to keep herself under control. I'm pretty sure it's more about not killing Draco than not losing.

Hmm well you are wondering off on the hole willow centered thing, but so far it seems interesting.

Later and Love
Bunney

the chapter was a little short ... I was expecting the duel ....

I love your story. It reminds me a bit about another story i read, by echo.
I liked that you pulled Lily into it. Especially that you didn' t just have him run to Petunia's
house, but explained his showed of thought.

I also thought I should remark that the Professor in Divination is called Trelawny.

gimme gimme gimme more! *greedy* :D I can't wait to read the next chapter!

thank you thank you thank you thank you... love getting reviews