WOW...heehee its really good so far..... i am actually a little peeved at jason though..............hee hee lol..... ........cant wait for next chap
Review By [thirtythreesgirl] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch3 - Courting Danger" from Chaoskitten
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loves :D
Can't wait for another update honey :D
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch3 - Courting Danger" from Ramenth
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Very interesting story, though I'm a bit confused. Wouldn't the authorities wind up involved? RPIT and Humans First would love a scandal like this one. :o
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch3 - Courting Danger" from AnnaLeigh
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I love this story and I am sooo excited that you finally updated. Great chapter, update soon!
Review By [AnnaLeigh] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch3 - Courting Danger" from AllenPitt
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Hm, presumably they'll have some method of keeping her from just leaving the city. Locked up in the circus? Cause even if she's out of there, in the city, she could go to the police & tell them about being kidnapped by vamps. And would be able to name names..... She really is a loose cannon to them, I suppose--lots of power, no training, and worst of all, not familiar with the customs. Her mom really didn't do her any favors here.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Not Rated
I like what I see so far, and am very interested in reading more. The only issues I have is some spelling/grammar errors that made reading the story rather annoying.
Review of chapter "Ch2 The Meeting" from Dragonelf
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::Feeds the plot bunny::
This story is really good so far and it definitely got potential to to grow to something big and worthy of nominating to COA.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch2 The Meeting" from AllenPitt
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I doubt Anita would be very happy to hear about what they're doing to Lisa....also of course she'll just leave the city unless they lock her up....
Comments from author:
:-D
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch2 The Meeting" from Chaoskitten
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I like it, her reactions are more human, less cocky then I have seen written by others. This level of vulnerability is great, even if she is pissy at our favorite wolf. (yeah its expected, but heh, is still funny.) I love the portrayals and can't wait to see more.
Feeds the plotbunnies cookies. I love it.
CK
Comments from author:
thanx i hope you like the new chapter than :-)
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [4 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch2 The Meeting" from chajalive
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Hm, I like the description of Jason's dilemma. I find the first person perspektive a bit difficult to follow and takes some getting used to. I guess we will find out what happened to "out" her to Jean Claude's posse. Damien is a bit mean, but maybe he is just being realistic. Chaja
Review By [chajalive] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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