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Review of chapter "With Shoes on Her Feet" from murbo
Review:
Hi!
Just wanted to say great story!!
I have read the others as well but I'm to lazy (and I do *have* one arm in a cast so....) to write a review for each of them so see this one as a BIG I Love all your stories review :-P.

I have just one question though...
I don't understand what "Sidy!" means in this sentence (but English isn't my mother language and toddler speak even harder so...)
"“’Antis!” the girl cries, joyous. “Sidy!” "

Oh well good job and i hope I'll read more of you in the future!!
//Malin (Sweden)
Comments from author:
Hi, thanks for the review. You know how little kids can't quite get words right sometimes, and their t's sound a little bit like d's? Well, that's what's happened here. She's saying, "Atlantis! City!" but she can only manage part of the city's name and her t's aren't as crisp as they should be.
Review By [murbo] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "With Shoes on Her Feet" from robertlisle
Review:
Interesting fast forward, where John and Faith have resolved their differences enough to spawn, along with everyone else on Atlantis.
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "With Shoes on Her Feet" from manic
Review:
The sweet is a nice break in-between the blood and gore ;) (My memory is being selective here)
Review By [manic] • Date [8 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "With Shoes on Her Feet" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Hey, everyone likes good maple syrup on their pancakes. There is absolutely nothing wrong with good sap, in food or in stories. ;-) I really enjoyed this, thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "With Shoes on Her Feet" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Let's hear it for incurable sappiness! I like it!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "With Shoes on Her Feet" from NaiveGhost
Review:
You gave me goosebumps!
I am a sucker for Faith / happy endings.

(I'm going to read all your other stuff probably today, neglecting my work ;-)

Thanks
Keep writing!
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "With Shoes on Her Feet" from Shezzi
Review:
You are an incurable sap...it was still a great story! can't wait to see what you come up with next in this series! please update soon! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "With Shoes on Her Feet" from purrfus
Review:
You say sap likes its a bad thing. That would only be true if it were poorly written, and since that isn't the case....
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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