Glad to see you were able to get thru the rest of the arc. Seemed like you were almost having to pull teeth there at some points. Were the idea's not flowing or the tone took more to come across? Anyway, enjoyed the arc overall and the accompanying side story of Xander's adventures. Hope that the next stage isn't as hard for you. You are continuing it right? Hope so, not enough irreverent humor in the world today, I say. Besides even Deadpool can't stop the dreaded plot bunnies when they gets ta multiplying. Actually that image is really surreal and funny when you think of it. Deadpool drowning in a sea of fluffy white bunnies and throwing out oneliners while admiting that they feel so soft and cuddly like that favorite jacket he used to jerk... Well anyways, hope that you still have more to tell and if you need someone to bounce ideas off of or just throw some your way to see if they start something, just ask.
Comments from author:
I am going to be continuing the story. There are a lot of places I want to go to on this story. It was hard to come up with an ending to this because there was just way too many ideas I had for it. I don't know if Deadpool would like bunnies for this string of thought. Bunnies are connected to magicians, magicians are connected to birthday parties, birthday parties are connected to clowns and everyone knows that clowns are a universal threat above Carl Rowe but just under Galactacus.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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