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Birth of a Merc

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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Nomma
Review:
Man, I was laughing the whole way through.

Sequel?
Review By [Nomma] • Date [29 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night of the Merc Pt.3" from Kestrel
Review:
I have actually put wasabi powder and hotsauce in someones food once. really is a hoot.
Review By [Kestrel] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bunney
Review:
This was good I'll go read the next bit :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [6 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
PPPBBBTTTT!!!!

Means it's a downer of an ending!

I'm sure I'll like the continuance.
Comments from author:
Ok?
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [21 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from misterq
Review:
Nooo! Well, I wonder what other gifts Deadpool left. And what mental suggestions he gave. Hopefully a regenerative power of some kind.
Comments from author:
For right now all Xander got was cancer and Deadpool's verbal diarrhea but wait till the next part of the series.
Review By [misterq] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from missinglink
Review:
Glad to see you were able to get thru the rest of the arc. Seemed like you were almost having to pull teeth there at some points. Were the idea's not flowing or the tone took more to come across? Anyway, enjoyed the arc overall and the accompanying side story of Xander's adventures. Hope that the next stage isn't as hard for you. You are continuing it right? Hope so, not enough irreverent humor in the world today, I say. Besides even Deadpool can't stop the dreaded plot bunnies when they gets ta multiplying. Actually that image is really surreal and funny when you think of it. Deadpool drowning in a sea of fluffy white bunnies and throwing out oneliners while admiting that they feel so soft and cuddly like that favorite jacket he used to jerk... Well anyways, hope that you still have more to tell and if you need someone to bounce ideas off of or just throw some your way to see if they start something, just ask.
Comments from author:
I am going to be continuing the story. There are a lot of places I want to go to on this story. It was hard to come up with an ending to this because there was just way too many ideas I had for it. I don't know if Deadpool would like bunnies for this string of thought. Bunnies are connected to magicians, magicians are connected to birthday parties, birthday parties are connected to clowns and everyone knows that clowns are a universal threat above Carl Rowe but just under Galactacus.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bill
Review:
So very well done!
Comments from author:
Why thank you.
Review By [Bill] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night of the Merc Pt.3" from ashez
Review:
A little gift in his cells? Um... would that be a healing factor or HORRIBLE TERMINAL CANCER?
Comments from author:
One or the other...Or maybe both. By the way what do you think of the new Cable series?
Review By [ashez] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night of the Merc Pt.3" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Jono?!! Isn't he a bit short for the role?

Maybe with some costume modifications...

I wonder if he's taller now and has a link to the great beast.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night of the Merc Pt.3" from ordieth
Review:
You bring such great levity to us. Thank you, and keep the laughs rolling.
Review By [ordieth] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night of the Merc Pt.3" from LFW
Review:
Fun read
Looking forward to finding out what all was left and how much fun Xander is going to have now
Review By [LFW] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night of the Merc Pt.3" from JediKnight
Review:
Hoping to read more of this story soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night of the Merc Pt.2" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice job on this story so far, please do your best to add more chapters soon
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night of the Merc Pt.2" from stonewar
Review:
Ok I was right reading this section made the other make a little more sense. but it was awfully short.
This is great. Please continue
Review By [stonewar] • Date [4 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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